Manitree
What would happen if....28 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely down across as a follow up to your other poem. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful Christmas and may you have a very happy new year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is a nicely down across as a follow up to your other poem. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a wonderful Christmas and may you have a very happy new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you again, my friend reading reading, commenting all a wonderful thing of which I appreciate very much! And I too.Wish you the same for your holidays and hope the big guy makes it down your chimney with everything you wish and need! Thanks again have an awesome evening!
Comment from jaded831
If evolution is to be believed, eventually we may have Manitrees. I love trees and plants and treat them with respect. Your poem makes me think I like that and it is well written in the Acrostic style.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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If evolution is to be believed, eventually we may have Manitrees. I love trees and plants and treat them with respect. Your poem makes me think I like that and it is well written in the Acrostic style.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi, thank you so much for your amazing review. Hi very much appreciate it! I'm very happy you stopped in to have a read to offer your kind comments and your great rating too! I hope you have the most amazing holiday and everything you I wish for comes to thanks again.Enjoy your evening!
Comment from Tim Margetts
Another poem about the Manitree, Lea.
This one an acrostic on mutation. It's a great piece of work.
Are we going to have a full series on this interesting creature?
Tim x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Another poem about the Manitree, Lea.
This one an acrostic on mutation. It's a great piece of work.
Are we going to have a full series on this interesting creature?
Tim x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Tim that's so crossed my mind! Very insightful, you are, and i'm so happy you'd like this! I'm pleased for your time and your review and your great rating.I appreciate it a lot. I hope the big guy in the red suit comes down. Your chimney and gives you everything you wish for ho.Ho ho and have a good night!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your inventive post about man and tree becoming one here, a very unusual word you have created here Lea.
(Undulating remains of life ooze a pestilent defense)
Suggestion here;
(Undulating remains of life's oozing pestilent defence)
Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed your inventive post about man and tree becoming one here, a very unusual word you have created here Lea.
(Undulating remains of life ooze a pestilent defense)
Suggestion here;
(Undulating remains of life's oozing pestilent defence)
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi Dolly, thank you. I took your advice and went ahead and made that change. Thank you for that! Thank you for a great review, too. This palm goes with the first one called The Meld where the Manitree began. As always, I thank you for your kind review and the great suggestion and the awesome rating too.Hope you have an amazing night!
Comment from Gerard F Keogh
This one has fever and passion and certainly moves along like the best melodrama. It almost echoes Bradbury in a way, Nice Stretch of the imagination. Regards from Gerard
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This one has fever and passion and certainly moves along like the best melodrama. It almost echoes Bradbury in a way, Nice Stretch of the imagination. Regards from Gerard
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Gerard, so happy you liked it. This is an extension of the first poem that I wrote called The Meld. Thought it might be fun to carry on the concept for a little while. Maybe make a story out of this blind poetry who knows no I really appreciate you reading and offering your thoughts. I'm so very happy you liked it. That's the best and I appreciate your time too. I hope you have a wonderful holiday and a great night!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
You. Never. Cease. To. Impress. Cool. Writing. And. Equally. Cool picture. To. Go. With. It. I. Enjoy. Reading. Your. Work. I. Look forward. To. Your. Next. Submission
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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You. Never. Cease. To. Impress. Cool. Writing. And. Equally. Cool picture. To. Go. With. It. I. Enjoy. Reading. Your. Work. I. Look forward. To. Your. Next. Submission
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Well, that's a kind compliment.Thank you very much.Thank you for the awesome reading.I mean, like, wow, i'm totally honored! Thanks too for your review and for your time. Most of all, appreciate it so much. I hope that you and yours have a wonderful holiday and that you're having a great night too. Thank you again!
Comment from Rick Gardner
Very deep, you see the depths we all can feel at times, searching for reasons unknown. Reasons of our true existence, why are we here, where does life begin.? Can't help myself as trained in biology but two independent cellular entities discovering each other with a direction defined already.
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Very deep, you see the depths we all can feel at times, searching for reasons unknown. Reasons of our true existence, why are we here, where does life begin.? Can't help myself as trained in biology but two independent cellular entities discovering each other with a direction defined already.
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi, Rick! I'm so happy like it truly! Your response is just as poetic. I must say the gift of a true writer bet you got a well spring of words that you just draw upon whenever you wish plethora of them! Thank you for your time for the great review. And i'm so happy you liked it.I wish you and yours the best holiday.Hope you have an awesome evening too!
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I love this, never thought I was a plethora of anything. Maybe Magnificento and Bellissimo, incarnate applies. My daughter one time said I smelled like dog poop, No word for that. Maybe obsequious. A new writer as I can't do what I wish, be a healer, I was good , animals told me, be plethoric, they needed me.
Comment from pome lover
you do write the strangest things. At first I thought it was a play on the word, manatee, (although I thought it was spelled, manitee), but since it wasn't, that blew that theory.) So, what theory is it? Oh, I see, I missed the first one and this is a continuation of it.
Well, I shall have to say a new race grown from the earth would interesting, (other than your second line about life oozing a pestilent defense) so this new life will not be friendly? I hope I'm wrong.
What an imagination you have. Arborlife. Fascinating.
Katharine
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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you do write the strangest things. At first I thought it was a play on the word, manatee, (although I thought it was spelled, manitee), but since it wasn't, that blew that theory.) So, what theory is it? Oh, I see, I missed the first one and this is a continuation of it.
Well, I shall have to say a new race grown from the earth would interesting, (other than your second line about life oozing a pestilent defense) so this new life will not be friendly? I hope I'm wrong.
What an imagination you have. Arborlife. Fascinating.
Katharine
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi katharine! The line you mentioned about oozing a pestilen defense. What that means when I wrote it, at least to myself was that life was dying. So it's going to use its last defense by spilling out disease, that's what pestilence means which I'm sure you already know it's to to spread illness and so This was the last ditch effort from the old living creatures to stop what was happening. So as they rotted, turned into this oozing mess, they spilled out disease as their last hurrah. New life comes along called Manitree, a mix of man and tree is the result when the two life types meld. Kinda creepy?I know a little bit fantasy, a little bit science fictionist, sort of. Ah, my brain went down a funky road. Thank you so very much. I'm so glad you spent the time to read it.And it's consider it and offer your comments and your great rating too! I truly wish you and yours. A wonderful holiday isn't that?You're having a great evening too!
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thank you and you, too!