Precious Gems: An Anthology
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "My Dear Edwine"A Rhyming Collection of Treasured Works
47 total reviews
Comment from jshep
This is amazing, Chris. You have gone back in time and captured the era and the moon that inspired you by Wuther Heights. An exceptional poem, so well written in rhyme and flow. Breathtaking and captivating in its depth of emotion that you have presented. The is professionalism in poety at its very best. I am so proud of you for where you are at now in your writing. 'Edwine, Edwine, I need you now, As sorrow plays across my brow.' fantastic. I can say no more than this is written by a poet. Luv, Joyce
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This is amazing, Chris. You have gone back in time and captured the era and the moon that inspired you by Wuther Heights. An exceptional poem, so well written in rhyme and flow. Breathtaking and captivating in its depth of emotion that you have presented. The is professionalism in poety at its very best. I am so proud of you for where you are at now in your writing. 'Edwine, Edwine, I need you now, As sorrow plays across my brow.' fantastic. I can say no more than this is written by a poet. Luv, Joyce
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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As I weakly tried to say in pm, thank you so very much for everything xoxoxooxox
Comment from Mr edd
How powerful and moving, it is hard to find the words to describe it. Brilliant,tremendous, I am not an expert,but it certainly does it for me.
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How powerful and moving, it is hard to find the words to describe it. Brilliant,tremendous, I am not an expert,but it certainly does it for me.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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As said in pm, thank you so much Mr edd. I truly appreciate your kind words and the six stars xoxoxoxoox
Comment from Winslow
Dear Lady,
A mythical romantic poem that flows and has superb rhyme. It is easy to read and the language brings a smile to ones face.
Warm regards,
Winslow
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Dear Lady,
A mythical romantic poem that flows and has superb rhyme. It is easy to read and the language brings a smile to ones face.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Thanks so very much Winslow xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment from rmdelta
Chris,
A very powerful poem, my friend. It is quite beautiful with descriptives throughout that easily paint us a picture you write. Smooth narration allows an easy read. Well done, Chris.
Reggie
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Chris,
A very powerful poem, my friend. It is quite beautiful with descriptives throughout that easily paint us a picture you write. Smooth narration allows an easy read. Well done, Chris.
Reggie
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Glad you enjoyed this Reggie. I truly appreciate your kind words and review xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Curt Mongold
I like the way you stretch! Sorta like I do. I need to post something tonight, my backlog is getting bigger every day.
Great write my friend. Truly good emotion and flow throughout.
Sincerely,
Curt
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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I like the way you stretch! Sorta like I do. I need to post something tonight, my backlog is getting bigger every day.
Great write my friend. Truly good emotion and flow throughout.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Bless yer cotton socks Curt! It's great to stretch, but even greater for that elasticism (??) to be appreciated by others. Will look forward to your next post my friend xoxoxoxxo
Comment from wazzo
You did do well with this one my friend, I can identify with what you have written having recently lost a wife. Things that you see and hear throw up the memories. You have captured that in your poem added to which there is that fine rhyme Blessings Albert
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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You did do well with this one my friend, I can identify with what you have written having recently lost a wife. Things that you see and hear throw up the memories. You have captured that in your poem added to which there is that fine rhyme Blessings Albert
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much wazzo. I am sorry to hear about your wife; hopefully your days of grief will soon come to an end my friend. Blessings to you xoxoxoxoxo
Comment from P1
wuthering heighs...my favourite book ever
this is great so mysterious ad romantic
love the name you have chosen. really enjoyed
sharing this one with you. hugs lynda.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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wuthering heighs...my favourite book ever
this is great so mysterious ad romantic
love the name you have chosen. really enjoyed
sharing this one with you. hugs lynda.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Aw, thanks Lynda. I enjoyed sharing this review!! xoxoxoxo
Comment from skye
Consider your wings unfolded and unfurled... this is wonderful.
Your lines read effortlessly, with a rhythm that is easy to follow.
Your words are creative and lovely.
Very very nice.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Consider your wings unfolded and unfurled... this is wonderful.
Your lines read effortlessly, with a rhythm that is easy to follow.
Your words are creative and lovely.
Very very nice.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Thank you very, very much skye. So glad you enjoyed this! xoxoxoxox
Comment from wierdgrace
this is so wonderful, the artwork first of all fits so well with the words and story of your poem. I love the structure and well it flows easy for all to read and understand, thank you so much for sharing. no errors or revisions.
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this is so wonderful, the artwork first of all fits so well with the words and story of your poem. I love the structure and well it flows easy for all to read and understand, thank you so much for sharing. no errors or revisions.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Thanks so much wierdgrace. Did you know I have been called "cwazycwiss"? Maybe that should be my screen name ... xoxoxoxoxoxo
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no I like your screen name
Comment from Soulester
Dear alpacalady,
This tribute to Wuthering Heights really evokes the novel with your choice of olde English.; I must say your ryhiming pattern complemented your vocabulary; it didn't sound forced at all, whatsoever.
Just one ittle snag for me: Did you mean , "you,love" or "your love" in the first line of the fourth stanza?
Your attempt at spreading your wings was very successful! Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Dear alpacalady,
This tribute to Wuthering Heights really evokes the novel with your choice of olde English.; I must say your ryhiming pattern complemented your vocabulary; it didn't sound forced at all, whatsoever.
Just one ittle snag for me: Did you mean , "you,love" or "your love" in the first line of the fourth stanza?
Your attempt at spreading your wings was very successful! Great job!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2009
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Thank you so much for your great review Soulester, and for pointing out you, love (which is what was meant). I'll go and fix immediately! xoxoxoxoxoxo