An Opportunistic Killing
Fanstory suspects.24 total reviews
Comment from RaymondJohn
The guy on the floor doesn't look a bit like me. LOL. Loved the story. I hope the heel in the head came after an extended roll in the hay. Best wishes. Ray.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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The guy on the floor doesn't look a bit like me. LOL. Loved the story. I hope the heel in the head came after an extended roll in the hay. Best wishes. Ray.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Lol, in my mind, you died a very happy man, Ray. Thanks for being a good sport. - John
Comment from Alexandra.Obreja
Well Sir, I gotta hand it to you, never in my life could have i creted such a story. I started by reading first the author's notes and I was : What the hell? Then i began reading the story and with each line my grin grew wider and wider, until I bursted into laughter at the end.
Good luck in the contest Sir! this is too funny a story and idea! Cheers, Alex
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Well Sir, I gotta hand it to you, never in my life could have i creted such a story. I started by reading first the author's notes and I was : What the hell? Then i began reading the story and with each line my grin grew wider and wider, until I bursted into laughter at the end.
Good luck in the contest Sir! this is too funny a story and idea! Cheers, Alex
Comment Written 04-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Thank you Alex. I appreciate your wonderful review and comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. - John
Comment from shelley kaye
lol :-P
yes
i'm feeling better
thank you
too many SAW movies
in one night ;-)
one thing .... YOU SPELLED MY NAME WRONG!
great entry! thanx for sharing and good luck.... you'll need it muwahahahahaha ;-)
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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lol :-P
yes
i'm feeling better
thank you
too many SAW movies
in one night ;-)
one thing .... YOU SPELLED MY NAME WRONG!
great entry! thanx for sharing and good luck.... you'll need it muwahahahahaha ;-)
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Oops. Sorry about that. I just edited it. Thanks for being a good sport. - John
Comment from Judian James
I loved it!! I'm not on the prose side enough to figure out who the murderer is, but all you top ten are, right?
""Miss Kaye had a psychotic episode and put all top ten writers on a list to write a murder mystery. Someone on the site decided to make the murder real. We're looking at all top ten, plus the next logical person who would benefit from one of you dead. Number eleven, someone
named, Mastery." I loved it. Excellent Thesis. Now get back to Gia!!
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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I loved it!! I'm not on the prose side enough to figure out who the murderer is, but all you top ten are, right?
""Miss Kaye had a psychotic episode and put all top ten writers on a list to write a murder mystery. Someone on the site decided to make the murder real. We're looking at all top ten, plus the next logical person who would benefit from one of you dead. Number eleven, someone
named, Mastery." I loved it. Excellent Thesis. Now get back to Gia!!
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010
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Gia and I are on the terrace having brunch mimosas right now, lol. Thanks for your fun review, Jude. - John
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so what's the inside scoop on the checkered scarf?