Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Wonderful photo that complimented your Writings From the Heart; sweet memories brought to life by your simple words. In two lines you have told a complete story. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thank you Aussie

Comment from rivki1111

Excellent

Hello, lovely imagery in this short work. You manage to say a lot, and I love the pic...so charming!!

I have no ideas for the improvement of your poem, and wish you the best of luck in the competition, cheers, rivki

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thank you rivki no one voted..........but thats ok i had fun writing for my mother

Comment from Ann Smith

Excellent

This lady looks like she is in love. I love photos from this time period because it reminds me of my mom and dad when they were young. I especially like the phrase, faith of love, we all need that inspiration in our life. Good luck with the contest. ann

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thank you Ann

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello deepwater,
a real good short poem with a happy thought.
Don't we all wish --

faith of love blooms high this day
As Birds on wing do hail.

Gert

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thank you Gert

reply by Gert sherwood on 22-May-2010

You are welcome deepwater
Gert

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have written a short love poem with strong imagery. I see visions of birds hailing, a great way to express love and all its glory. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thank you mermaids GW

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

I like your poem. It is very expressive. It was definitely easy to read and did not feel forced. You did a very good job.

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thank you Tex for the comment GW

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I don't know why this poem didn't come across my PM's, but somehow I missed it. I am glad I discovered it. It's very well written and the sentiment is easily felt.

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thats ok Barbara and thanks for reading now GW

Comment from AmorGentil

Excellent

Thanks God, because once we lost that faith, we have not love, not nothing, Faith can move Mountains (Hearts)the healing of all evils, the door to entering the heaven kingdom.

Very nice short though.

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thanks again for reading Amor

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

Hi Deepwater, I loved this short poem. The faith of love blooms high this day as Birds on wing do hail.
When young, there is so much faith in love and your choice of picture reflects the radiance of this love.
well penned. luv jada

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thank you jada for this GW

Comment from mountainwriter49

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your short poem.
I liked the imagery of the young woman
in the old photograph juxtapositioned
with the words of your poem. Perhaps
she is coming to meet her lover or husband...

May I offer a suggestion for you to consider?
As B[b]irds on wing[s] do hail

Good luck with the contest.
-ray

 Comment Written 22-May-2010

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reply by the author on 22-May-2010

thanks ray for the comments and reading GW