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Writings From the Heart

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A book of Poetry & Writing

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Comment from Gideon Roth
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Hello Deepwater. I was happy to see that you had posted another poem. This is very well done and so appropriate for this Memorial Day time of year. Keep up the great writing...Gideon

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you Gideon
Comment from Frozen Fire
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Although I wish war would end, I'm proud and grateful of all the men and women that put their lives on the line for us day after day, year after year, and decade after decade. This is a well-written piece you've penned.
Shirley

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you Shirley
Comment from JimLee
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Wow! This one says a lot. You have captured the commitment of practically every soldier in America.
I hope you have nipped the conscience of all who read this.
Americans need better to understand what gave us the freedom we have had up until recently. Defend our soldiers and defend our constitution.
Excellent poem!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you Jim
Comment from Vladilynn
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Working in a military bases..I really do agree with you! Thank you for the wonderful tribute for our militaries in all country, they deserved your poem.

I loved how your art fit with your words.

Well written.

Love much
Lynn:0)
(scratching head) Do I ned to say Nice meetng you!!?
Geeezzh~ I can't remember everyone here. lol

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    your welcome and thank you Lynn
Comment from laren
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This is a great poem honoring soldiers who died in wars.
Sometimes they don't receive honors because de way they died. So there is a memorial day to remember them.
Congratulations!
Laren

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you Laren
reply by laren on 04-Jun-2010
    Thank you for sharing,
    Laren
Comment from daniela.albu
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This is a powerful,solemn poem written in simple words that go directly to the heart. I think this poem will face time with great success and remain a good piece of writing for generations to come.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you daniela
Comment from tazzaangel
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very much ejoyed this poem it is a fitting tribute to our service men and women and your right we must never forget my father was a service men and my grand father and great grandfather before him thakyou for this lasting tribute

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    welcome Tazz
Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn
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This is a beautiful, inspiring and moving tribute to all those who have lost their lives defending their country. This is a topic close to my heart. Very well done!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you Janine
Comment from Marathonwriter
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Hello deepwater,
I enjoyed reading your poem. My favorite part is your last line. I like how you included sisters.
:0)Chris

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    welcome Chris
Comment from Frank Fiction
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Excellent poem, ges right to the point, and a perfect a picture to go along with it. Crossing heaven or earth to defend our families and countries. Great line. THanks.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you frank