Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Perp Ihebom
I enjoyed reading this chapter. THERE IS ENOUGH SUSPENSE AND INTRIGUE IN IT TO SUSTAIN THE READER'S INTEREST. The theme is universal and should concern everyone. kudos
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. THERE IS ENOUGH SUSPENSE AND INTRIGUE IN IT TO SUSTAIN THE READER'S INTEREST. The theme is universal and should concern everyone. kudos
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Summer Falls
Wow. I really need to go back and catch up. This chapter was riveting! I could see it like a movie, Barbara.
The faith Cassie has in Joe is touching. The dialogue is very well done and I did not spot any spag.
I love your style and courage.
Love
Summer
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Wow. I really need to go back and catch up. This chapter was riveting! I could see it like a movie, Barbara.
The faith Cassie has in Joe is touching. The dialogue is very well done and I did not spot any spag.
I love your style and courage.
Love
Summer
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Welcome back stranger. Thank you for your kind review.
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I just keep getting stranger huh? I have been busy... but that is no excuse. :)
Comment from R. K. Alan
Nicely building, you could cut the tension with a knife. I liked the way Joe managed to get a baddie into position for a sniper shot. I assume he'll manage to get the others. Ray aka Krylon
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Nicely building, you could cut the tension with a knife. I liked the way Joe managed to get a baddie into position for a sniper shot. I assume he'll manage to get the others. Ray aka Krylon
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from VicToria76
I just loved this chapter. The dialogue kept the story flowing. And it grabbed my attention from beginning to end. Well done!
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I just loved this chapter. The dialogue kept the story flowing. And it grabbed my attention from beginning to end. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review,
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Glad to hear you are doing somewhat well and are still able to write. I wish you the best. In this, the kidnapped girls are a big concern. The artwork is awesome. I look forward to your next chapter. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Glad to hear you are doing somewhat well and are still able to write. I wish you the best. In this, the kidnapped girls are a big concern. The artwork is awesome. I look forward to your next chapter. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Ahhh that Joe is a brave man but he knows what he is doing. Seems something's gotta give soon and he just must have really pissed those guys off. Awesome write you with plenty of action and great attention paid to details as in the appearance of the girls and their fear. Cant' wait for the next chapter now!!!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Ahhh that Joe is a brave man but he knows what he is doing. Seems something's gotta give soon and he just must have really pissed those guys off. Awesome write you with plenty of action and great attention paid to details as in the appearance of the girls and their fear. Cant' wait for the next chapter now!!!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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My pleasure. It's a wonderful story and so full of great action. I'm enjoying it very much!!!
Comment from sherwood56
This is very intriguing! I would love to find out what happens next!
I'm a little confused about who is on who's side, and what is going on. Part of that is because I have not read the chapter before it, but some of it's not. My biggest confusion is over whether Joe wants the girls and the agent to go free. He says no, that the girls are innocent, when Matt says that, but then says he wants them to be let go. That's a little confusing. Overall, though, this is great work!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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This is very intriguing! I would love to find out what happens next!
I'm a little confused about who is on who's side, and what is going on. Part of that is because I have not read the chapter before it, but some of it's not. My biggest confusion is over whether Joe wants the girls and the agent to go free. He says no, that the girls are innocent, when Matt says that, but then says he wants them to be let go. That's a little confusing. Overall, though, this is great work!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Your problem would be solved it you read the first 11 chapters, then you would know the characters and why they say what they do. I spent a lot of time developing each character. Thank you for your review.
Comment from K. L. Bauman
This chapter was as wonderful as the rest. the build up of tension with Joe and Cassie and all that going on is well done--makes me want to read the next chapter right away. I didn't notice any bloopers.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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This chapter was as wonderful as the rest. the build up of tension with Joe and Cassie and all that going on is well done--makes me want to read the next chapter right away. I didn't notice any bloopers.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from patmedium
I am tired of having to find your postings and wondering whether I have missed anything like a progress report ... so I'm fanning you.
THIS is excellent, Barbara, and broadcasts pain and stress strongly on all wavebands.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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I am tired of having to find your postings and wondering whether I have missed anything like a progress report ... so I'm fanning you.
THIS is excellent, Barbara, and broadcasts pain and stress strongly on all wavebands.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad to have you as a fan.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara ....
I enjoyed reading this chapter of your book. At least, now, we know that Cassie is alive and that Joe is on hand, although a captive, to help her.
There is nothing to suggest changing and I look forward to the next chapter.
It is good to know that you chemo-therapy is progressing well.
Love from ........ Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Hullo Barbara ....
I enjoyed reading this chapter of your book. At least, now, we know that Cassie is alive and that Joe is on hand, although a captive, to help her.
There is nothing to suggest changing and I look forward to the next chapter.
It is good to know that you chemo-therapy is progressing well.
Love from ........ Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.