Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Part 2 Chapter 5"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from N.K. Wagner
Well done, Barbara. Troy and his father are going about this logically, but I suspect Anna will contact Troy before he finds her, sketch or no sketch. She's not an independent person. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Well done, Barbara. Troy and his father are going about this logically, but I suspect Anna will contact Troy before he finds her, sketch or no sketch. She's not an independent person. :) Nancy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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I tend to agree with you.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
So the chase continues, and the lady has certainly gone to ground, one hopes where the scumbag she's married to won't find her.
Patrick
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Hi Barbara,
So the chase continues, and the lady has certainly gone to ground, one hopes where the scumbag she's married to won't find her.
Patrick
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Carolyn 12
I know I have said this before but i am glad you are writing against abuse..I hope Anna is able to stay out of harms way..Thank you so much for your story..
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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I know I have said this before but i am glad you are writing against abuse..I hope Anna is able to stay out of harms way..Thank you so much for your story..
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Des Beirne
This may seem a silly question but what's a PI? It's not a term I know, must be a USA thing.
I love the suspense that you're keeping Anna hidden from us, It make me want to read the next post sooner.
Still enjoying,and looking forward to more.
Des
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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This may seem a silly question but what's a PI? It's not a term I know, must be a USA thing.
I love the suspense that you're keeping Anna hidden from us, It make me want to read the next post sooner.
Still enjoying,and looking forward to more.
Des
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. A PI is a private investigator.
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Thanks for that, they're not really a part of life over here.
Des
Comment from JeffreyStone
It is difficult to criticize writing this good. Your dialogue is very believable and realistic. The narrative has no wasted wordss. I like the tale very much. JeffreyStone
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It is difficult to criticize writing this good. Your dialogue is very believable and realistic. The narrative has no wasted wordss. I like the tale very much. JeffreyStone
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from glpar
As always I am left wanting more, the story continues to keep my interest and I'm anxious to know if they find her and if she is safe and sound.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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As always I am left wanting more, the story continues to keep my interest and I'm anxious to know if they find her and if she is safe and sound.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Espresso momma
I really liked the details, a wink, wiping her hands on the towel, and such. It gives the feel of being there. I liked reading this chapter.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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I really liked the details, a wink, wiping her hands on the towel, and such. It gives the feel of being there. I liked reading this chapter.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from misscookie
Hello good to see your work posted to me that means your coming along fine.
I love rereading this chapter
As always there was never a dull moment, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Hello good to see your work posted to me that means your coming along fine.
I love rereading this chapter
As always there was never a dull moment, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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Your very welcome.
Comment from K-mo
Your story holds my interest. I do hope Troy finds her alive. Your statistics are staggering. It's hard to believe there are so many people in the world who feel the need to inflict pain upon others. I love the passion you clearly feel for your topic and your willingness to write about it. This is how we change lives.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Your story holds my interest. I do hope Troy finds her alive. Your statistics are staggering. It's hard to believe there are so many people in the world who feel the need to inflict pain upon others. I love the passion you clearly feel for your topic and your willingness to write about it. This is how we change lives.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I THINK THIS IS A VERY IMPORTANT STORY AND A VERY ENJOYABLE READING AT THE SAME TIME. IT'S NICE TO KNOW THAT ANNA IS NOT ALONE, THERE'S PEOPLE LOOKING AFTER HER.
VERY WELL DONE! AS ALWAYS...
:)
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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I THINK THIS IS A VERY IMPORTANT STORY AND A VERY ENJOYABLE READING AT THE SAME TIME. IT'S NICE TO KNOW THAT ANNA IS NOT ALONE, THERE'S PEOPLE LOOKING AFTER HER.
VERY WELL DONE! AS ALWAYS...
:)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.