Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Part 1 Chapter 6"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Tellis
Yeah, he needs to keep his distance or it could cause problems with the husband in court. Great chapter and I enjoyed reading it.
Tellis
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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Yeah, he needs to keep his distance or it could cause problems with the husband in court. Great chapter and I enjoyed reading it.
Tellis
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Troy doesn't know exactly where Anna is, but he suspects Ellen Collier helped her escape from the hospital. Ellen is part of a network that provides safe-haven for abused women and children. Anna seems safe enough. Maybe he should just let thing go. Anna will contact him when she feels safe.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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Troy doesn't know exactly where Anna is, but he suspects Ellen Collier helped her escape from the hospital. Ellen is part of a network that provides safe-haven for abused women and children. Anna seems safe enough. Maybe he should just let thing go. Anna will contact him when she feels safe.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from StanRants
I really like your work. Do you write about subjects you're familiar with only, or do you do stories on subjects you have to research to learn about? This was another nice piece. -Stan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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I really like your work. Do you write about subjects you're familiar with only, or do you do stories on subjects you have to research to learn about? This was another nice piece. -Stan
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2011
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I write about whatever hits me at the time. I do research many things.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
HI BARBARA!
IT'S WONDERFUL TO KNOW THAT PAUL IS MAKING PROGRESS ON FINDING ANA. A VERY INTERESTING CHAPTER, REALLY ENJOYABLE TO READ.
WELL DONE!!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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HI BARBARA!
IT'S WONDERFUL TO KNOW THAT PAUL IS MAKING PROGRESS ON FINDING ANA. A VERY INTERESTING CHAPTER, REALLY ENJOYABLE TO READ.
WELL DONE!!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I am not sure if this is well done and was really enjoyable to read, then why did I receive three stars. What do I need to change to get 5 stars.
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WAOOO!! I'LL NEVER WOULD GIVE YOU THREE STARS... IT HAS TO BE SOMETHING WRONG WITH THE SISTEM... I'M SORRY!!
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Thank you. Sometimes it happens to me too. And someone will question it. Thank you for the correction.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - another great post. This one really picked up a notch on intensity. It looks like you've done your homework on abused women. I of course will look forward to your next post. Bill
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Hi Barbara - another great post. This one really picked up a notch on intensity. It looks like you've done your homework on abused women. I of course will look forward to your next post. Bill
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thnk you for your kind review and support.
Comment from writerwish
This is a great story and glad you have been able to keep it up. I like the author notes that state all the types of women who stay and why. I will copy this for my domestic violence file. I guess because I'm a social worker, I am always looking for new information, perhaps informally I may still be able to help someone.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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This is a great story and glad you have been able to keep it up. I like the author notes that state all the types of women who stay and why. I will copy this for my domestic violence file. I guess because I'm a social worker, I am always looking for new information, perhaps informally I may still be able to help someone.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from moyramouse
Now they know that Anna is safe. Everett will probably discover where she is hiding. It is going to be hard for Troy to stay out of things but his dad's advice needs to be heeded. I hope Anna does not have to go through the trauma of a Kidnap trial after all the abuse she has had to suffer at Bobby's hands.
xxmouse
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Now they know that Anna is safe. Everett will probably discover where she is hiding. It is going to be hard for Troy to stay out of things but his dad's advice needs to be heeded. I hope Anna does not have to go through the trauma of a Kidnap trial after all the abuse she has had to suffer at Bobby's hands.
xxmouse
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from tango494
I like the way your story continues to flow. You have kept me interested and involved with the story line more than I myself would have imagined. I look forward to seeing how the story will end, although I think I have a good idea now.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I like the way your story continues to flow. You have kept me interested and involved with the story line more than I myself would have imagined. I look forward to seeing how the story will end, although I think I have a good idea now.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Another wonderful chapter and your author notes are such a wonderful resource. I love the website of info-a wonderful addition to what you have already provided. Thank you so much!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Another wonderful chapter and your author notes are such a wonderful resource. I love the website of info-a wonderful addition to what you have already provided. Thank you so much!!! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Posting 18 is excellently written with great dialogue and splendid descriptive writing. So Anna is in hiding at Ellen Collier's who runs a "underground safe-haven for abused women and children." And Troy's dad fears Anna could be charged with kidnapping. Wow, what an exosive chapter. I look forward to read what happens. Keep staying healthy! Love ya...
Melissa.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Barbara,
Posting 18 is excellently written with great dialogue and splendid descriptive writing. So Anna is in hiding at Ellen Collier's who runs a "underground safe-haven for abused women and children." And Troy's dad fears Anna could be charged with kidnapping. Wow, what an exosive chapter. I look forward to read what happens. Keep staying healthy! Love ya...
Melissa.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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It's amazing you say it's explosive and another reviewer said it's boring and could have been written in two sentences. I just love this site.