Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Part two, Chapter 8"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Tellis
I bet that creep has sold or destroyed all of her things. He just that kind of jerk. I enjoyed reading this and found no spags.
Tellis
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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I bet that creep has sold or destroyed all of her things. He just that kind of jerk. I enjoyed reading this and found no spags.
Tellis
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
You have hit the nail on the head again, my friend.
Even when one knows going back to get one's things is
the end of an abusive life and the start of a new life,
it is still extremely difficult to go back to where all
those horrible memories were made. This is another
superb chapter. I don't know how you could have done
any better on your own computer. You are having a much
deserved vacation.
love,
jan
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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barbara:
You have hit the nail on the head again, my friend.
Even when one knows going back to get one's things is
the end of an abusive life and the start of a new life,
it is still extremely difficult to go back to where all
those horrible memories were made. This is another
superb chapter. I don't know how you could have done
any better on your own computer. You are having a much
deserved vacation.
love,
jan
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from A.R. Primavera
Very nicely written. I love the way the characters developed throughout. I'm going to have to read more chapters. Thank you for sharing it with us. It could stand on its own as a story
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Very nicely written. I love the way the characters developed throughout. I'm going to have to read more chapters. Thank you for sharing it with us. It could stand on its own as a story
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dportwood
barbara.wilkey
As always your writing is well done without the distraction of spag and other errors. Your story is developing nicely and you leave the reader wondering what happens next.
Duane
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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barbara.wilkey
As always your writing is well done without the distraction of spag and other errors. Your story is developing nicely and you leave the reader wondering what happens next.
Duane
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from misscookie
It WILL BE HERE BEFORE YOU KNOW IT. THEN YOU WILL NEED vacation from a vacation.
I love the story as always there is never a dull moment. You have away of keeping a reader into your story.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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It WILL BE HERE BEFORE YOU KNOW IT. THEN YOU WILL NEED vacation from a vacation.
I love the story as always there is never a dull moment. You have away of keeping a reader into your story.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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I am now trying to rest from my vacation. Thank you for the kind review.
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I told you. welcome back your very welcome.
Comment from Nanashirley
I like the way things are going so far. The story is developing nicely. I know that for continuation things won't stay this nice but one can hope. I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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I like the way things are going so far. The story is developing nicely. I know that for continuation things won't stay this nice but one can hope. I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sefiros
The piece seems to be in status. It's starting with small matters and is building towards a climax. I can't help but feeling that some retrospective could be used to fill Anna's thoughts. What if I do this or what if I do that? kind of thing. Nice job and looking forward to next part.
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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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The piece seems to be in status. It's starting with small matters and is building towards a climax. I can't help but feeling that some retrospective could be used to fill Anna's thoughts. What if I do this or what if I do that? kind of thing. Nice job and looking forward to next part.
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Anna has done that in part one and will do that again in part three. Thank you for the review.
Comment from TJ Starbuck
This had good dialogue. It was easy to read and flowed naturally. I'm catching on to what your working on here. This was quite lovely.
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This had good dialogue. It was easy to read and flowed naturally. I'm catching on to what your working on here. This was quite lovely.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from teacherdub
Anna's struggle is proceeding well in this new chapter. Facing life with the help of others, having to tell her boss, trusting again, etc. All of these elements are realistic in the world Anna lives in. Reads smoothly, adds a bit of relief to Anna's ordeal, and has no errors. td
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Anna's struggle is proceeding well in this new chapter. Facing life with the help of others, having to tell her boss, trusting again, etc. All of these elements are realistic in the world Anna lives in. Reads smoothly, adds a bit of relief to Anna's ordeal, and has no errors. td
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from peggles
I love this chapter too that you have shown in this story. It is filled with the important things in life.
Money can't buy this.
I am hoping Anna gets all she deserves.
the picture is gorgeous
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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I love this chapter too that you have shown in this story. It is filled with the important things in life.
Money can't buy this.
I am hoping Anna gets all she deserves.
the picture is gorgeous
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.