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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from TammyGail
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These chapters are so compelling......
So many can relate to such abuse more than would ever admit.
I enjoyed the read .... You did a fine job expressing .....
Thanks for sharing .. .

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2011


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Comment from Tellis
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That's great that the loud-mouthed woman had to pay the money back and now she might get stuck with the legal fees, LoL. Great chapter.

Tellis

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2011


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Comment from Queenise
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Barbara, another mind blowing and simply engaging and marvelous chapter that was so enjoyable to read. That mother in law is definitely a demon's darling daughter. I love to hate her. You did a fabulous job with her. Feeling like I know this family better everytime you post. Great. Queenise

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2011


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    You're welcome. Queenise
Comment from barfy
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Hi Babs... Wow... a talented writer you are... The picture was an obvious message too... But not necessary, your words painted pretty pictures in my mind... Yeah, great work... Cheers

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2011


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Comment from Nanashirley
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I like Paul a lot. I think that the mother-in-law is a lot of the sons problems. I had a mother-in-law like that. She caught her son cheating and it was still my fault.

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Comment from Cumbrianlass
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Another very well written chapter, Barbara. The dialogue is so believable. This is a tough subject and you handle the presentation of it so well. I am glad that Anna is getting so much support. She needs all that she can get. That mother-in-law is a real nasty piece of work!

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2011


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Comment from amahra
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God, Bobby really scared me when the guy who bought Anna's car said that Bobby said "she won't need a car where she's going. That can only mean one thing. He really intends to kill her. And the mother-in-law from hell, is not helping much. Loved this chapter. Great writing as always my dear. I know what Anna is going through. I hope it ends for her the way it ended for me.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2011


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Comment from Realist101
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I have taught my son to have respect for women...that no, means no. That he is to be kind and helpful...I despise people who act like this woman. Did you see those people who let that little 10 year old girl suffocate??? Ame Deal. GOD. I have never been so upset. I have a story too about that. THIS is good Barb, and I hope you are feeling well too! I think my turn is here for such problems...take care! xoxo, susan

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2011


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reply by Realist101 on 16-Aug-2011
    SO welcome Barb...I have missed so many chapters, not good. I will keep reading as much as I can...stay well!xoxo, susan
Comment from amada
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There is always a mrs. Rodgers around...Do I know her! This is a great chapter that keep the story going strong. Great happenings in here.

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Comment from Doug LeCroy
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This chapter is well done. It gives some insight into the selfish nature of spouse batterers. My wife's twin sister was married to a monster that had no conscience. He beat his wife and children for no apparent reason at all. He would also take advantage of anyone so long as he thought he could get away with it. You have aptly described the character of such a person, a person easily recognized by anyone who has experienced a similar situation.
doug

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2011


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    Thank you for the kind review and insight.