Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from peggles
Another good chapter
your story moves at a steady pace which is easy to follow
Anna is lucky Troy is still around
She doesn't seem to appreciate him at all silly girl
He only wants to help
It is such a shame Anna is still living in fear of her ex-husband even through he is locked away
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Another good chapter
your story moves at a steady pace which is easy to follow
Anna is lucky Troy is still around
She doesn't seem to appreciate him at all silly girl
He only wants to help
It is such a shame Anna is still living in fear of her ex-husband even through he is locked away
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rashi kumar
The artwork is really a gem!
Very well-written! I am reading this story for the second time as my net connection failed yesterday before I could write a review!
Very grasping and interesting!!
Pleasure to read!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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The artwork is really a gem!
Very well-written! I am reading this story for the second time as my net connection failed yesterday before I could write a review!
Very grasping and interesting!!
Pleasure to read!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Herb
Another well penned chapter, I not that familiar with the plot but its easy to feel for Anne, I hope she learns to trust again.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Another well penned chapter, I not that familiar with the plot but its easy to feel for Anne, I hope she learns to trust again.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tammara
This story is getting so good, I just love reading it. It is so sad that Anna is still tormented by her brute of an ex-husband. It takes time to rebuild trust after being in an abusive situation, and your words convey this message. Also, I just love the painting your husband did! You and your husband are so talented, you make a great team. I look forward to your next chapter. It was a pleasure to read and to review your work. :)
Tammara
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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This story is getting so good, I just love reading it. It is so sad that Anna is still tormented by her brute of an ex-husband. It takes time to rebuild trust after being in an abusive situation, and your words convey this message. Also, I just love the painting your husband did! You and your husband are so talented, you make a great team. I look forward to your next chapter. It was a pleasure to read and to review your work. :)
Tammara
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
I have finally caught up and am still intrigued. I must say I want to know what is going to happen. Anna still has some adjusting to do and you show that very clearly.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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I have finally caught up and am still intrigued. I must say I want to know what is going to happen. Anna still has some adjusting to do and you show that very clearly.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rchitwood
You could not live without your muse and I know Anna would not be as alive with Troy by her side.As always your story is very well written and has good dialogue and characters.
Very believable I would recommend this to others. Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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You could not live without your muse and I know Anna would not be as alive with Troy by her side.As always your story is very well written and has good dialogue and characters.
Very believable I would recommend this to others. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and support. I appreciate both.
Comment from Gideon300
This is my first time reading your work so i don't have any background knowledge of the story. It has a good flow but I am left wondering why spend so much time on where to hang a painting. The most moving and telling part was the end and perhaps when someone states how much the child looks like him. I'd build on those emotions or the character embarrassment on that being noticed and trying more or less to pull attention away from the remark and also Michael's reaction which i only dimly got he didn't want it to publicly displayed. Good work. I would continue to read more.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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This is my first time reading your work so i don't have any background knowledge of the story. It has a good flow but I am left wondering why spend so much time on where to hang a painting. The most moving and telling part was the end and perhaps when someone states how much the child looks like him. I'd build on those emotions or the character embarrassment on that being noticed and trying more or less to pull attention away from the remark and also Michael's reaction which i only dimly got he didn't want it to publicly displayed. Good work. I would continue to read more.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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There's a very major reason why I spent so much time on the placement of the painting. I never put anything in a post without a reason. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:
Another nice pacing chapter. Once more you show Anna and Michael becoming more integrated into Troy's family. It is obvious that Troy's love is building up, but sadly, the past abuse that Anna suffered still lingers in her mind and keeps her from recognizing a warm and genuine relationship. Mainly she feels unworthy of a romance with Troy.
Now that loud muffler brings back the fear of her ex husband. who is driving the unseen car?
Roger
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Hi Barbara:
Another nice pacing chapter. Once more you show Anna and Michael becoming more integrated into Troy's family. It is obvious that Troy's love is building up, but sadly, the past abuse that Anna suffered still lingers in her mind and keeps her from recognizing a warm and genuine relationship. Mainly she feels unworthy of a romance with Troy.
Now that loud muffler brings back the fear of her ex husband. who is driving the unseen car?
Roger
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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The driver will be reveled all in good time. I am still building to it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Poor Anna, still tormented
by her brute of an ex-husband
who gives her no peace.
But she has a good friend in
Troy and his parents...Michael's
adopted grand-parents.
Loved this chapter,
you never disappoint, Barbara.
Margaret
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Poor Anna, still tormented
by her brute of an ex-husband
who gives her no peace.
But she has a good friend in
Troy and his parents...Michael's
adopted grand-parents.
Loved this chapter,
you never disappoint, Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Artasylum
what a poignant read this is ... I love the story and hope that many read to learn and hopefully take action against violence... i love a friend to just that... thanks, yours, diana
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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what a poignant read this is ... I love the story and hope that many read to learn and hopefully take action against violence... i love a friend to just that... thanks, yours, diana
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.