Comment from Janie King

Excellent

Oh my...that would be a sorry situation to find oneself in..I would think it would be sad for a person to really wish they had never been born. Good piece..Good luck in the contest. God bless.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012

Thank you Janie.

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

There are a few human rats around here that carry a plague. You did well for only six words. I really don't get why these contests are limited to so few words. At minimum I would say twenty five to fifty. But that's just my opinion... John

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012

Thank you John.

Comment from krazykats2011

Excellent

And I bet, had he been given the opportunity, he would have had volumes to tell! What a great verse. I can't believe an entire story could be told with so few words. Wow, great job and good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012

Thank you KrazyKat.

reply by krazykats2011 on 19-Jan-2012

Any time.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your taking on the persona of the "rat." Your succinct story conjures up the terrors of the "plague." Best wishes in the contest. -Joan

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012

Thank you Joan.