Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "part one, Chapter 20"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from babyross
I enjoyed reading this story. It is sad how abuse is rampant in society involving adults and children. I found your work so believable, the characters were great. I feel so bad for Anna. Nice work.
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I enjoyed reading this story. It is sad how abuse is rampant in society involving adults and children. I found your work so believable, the characters were great. I feel so bad for Anna. Nice work.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MumEsGirl
I loved the suspense of the hospital waiting room in this chapter and also the mystery surrounding the chop shop and Anna's missing car.
Credit goes to you for your excellent typing while wrestling with a playful kittens
hugs
kate
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I loved the suspense of the hospital waiting room in this chapter and also the mystery surrounding the chop shop and Anna's missing car.
Credit goes to you for your excellent typing while wrestling with a playful kittens
hugs
kate
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Comment from abbasjoy
Another great chapter. The dialogue between the characters is very natural and flows well.
I'm glad the code blue wasn't for Anna. You could feel the tension with Troy's pacing and just with the conversation between all of those in the waiting room.
Besides all that is happening, the reader is never allowed to forget the whole situation is caused by the Domestic abuse, which sucks in so many people, and causes pain to so many lives.
Great job!
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Another great chapter. The dialogue between the characters is very natural and flows well.
I'm glad the code blue wasn't for Anna. You could feel the tension with Troy's pacing and just with the conversation between all of those in the waiting room.
Besides all that is happening, the reader is never allowed to forget the whole situation is caused by the Domestic abuse, which sucks in so many people, and causes pain to so many lives.
Great job!
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from gramalot8
Aww, Barbara. It is a romance story, even with all the other stuff. I love this chapter, because it is a hopeful one for Anna, and well, Troy says it all in the last sentence. Good job as always. Jerri
P.S. Hope you are feeling well and doing good at this time, yourself.
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Aww, Barbara. It is a romance story, even with all the other stuff. I love this chapter, because it is a hopeful one for Anna, and well, Troy says it all in the last sentence. Good job as always. Jerri
P.S. Hope you are feeling well and doing good at this time, yourself.
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Comment from RebelRose
Well, now we can all breathe a sigh of relief that the code wasn't Anna. Now, we wait for the next chapter to see how long she remains in the coma. Very good chapter.
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Well, now we can all breathe a sigh of relief that the code wasn't Anna. Now, we wait for the next chapter to see how long she remains in the coma. Very good chapter.
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Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Now Anna is free of Bobby and his friends. I had to agree it is too bad wife beaters don't suffer as much as their victim. Hubby and I were watching 'Persons of Interest' last week. Mr. Reese had a great solution for the wife beater, he placed drugs on him and the authorities in the country the man was sent to threw the book at him; some countries hold them until they die.
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Now Anna is free of Bobby and his friends. I had to agree it is too bad wife beaters don't suffer as much as their victim. Hubby and I were watching 'Persons of Interest' last week. Mr. Reese had a great solution for the wife beater, he placed drugs on him and the authorities in the country the man was sent to threw the book at him; some countries hold them until they die.
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Comment from Cumbrianlass
Excellent! Oh, I'm so pleased Troy said the three little words, Barbara. And it sounds like the cops have a bag full of crap to stick on the others.
Good chapter. I know she's going to make it.
Hugs, Av.
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Excellent! Oh, I'm so pleased Troy said the three little words, Barbara. And it sounds like the cops have a bag full of crap to stick on the others.
Good chapter. I know she's going to make it.
Hugs, Av.
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Comment from Meta~Mark
wow- this is extremely compelling from just reading this portion,,,wow! great story line!
"That's just the beginning." Everett grinned. "It seems not only were those three into stealing cars. Back behind their building was about half an acre of marijuana plants surrounded by a corn field and covered with white screening. You know the type gardeners use for protection." He chuckled. "And an illegal still. They made White Lightin'."
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wow- this is extremely compelling from just reading this portion,,,wow! great story line!
"That's just the beginning." Everett grinned. "It seems not only were those three into stealing cars. Back behind their building was about half an acre of marijuana plants surrounded by a corn field and covered with white screening. You know the type gardeners use for protection." He chuckled. "And an illegal still. They made White Lightin'."
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Comment from Overthehill
I am not familiar with this story, but I do know it is well written and atmospheric. I have just started a new book myself and you have reassured me with your notes, that it is necessary to consider and re consider as you go along. I hope the kittens have settled a little.
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I am not familiar with this story, but I do know it is well written and atmospheric. I have just started a new book myself and you have reassured me with your notes, that it is necessary to consider and re consider as you go along. I hope the kittens have settled a little.
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Comment from dportwood
barbara,
You are bringing the story along nicely and it is getting more interesting all the time. I enjoyed the discussion of the three dirt bags and the list of crimes they are involved in. Good work.
Duane
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barbara,
You are bringing the story along nicely and it is getting more interesting all the time. I enjoyed the discussion of the three dirt bags and the list of crimes they are involved in. Good work.
Duane
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Thank you for the kind review.