Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "Anna's in a coma."Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Jane Johnson
Very heart wrenching story and easy to follow each person's moves and gestures. Thanks so much for sharing this! I like the picture also.
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Very heart wrenching story and easy to follow each person's moves and gestures. Thanks so much for sharing this! I like the picture also.
Comment Written 16-May-2012
reply by the author on 16-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
This is excellent. No one should ever underestimate the
bond between a mother and her child - especially when the
child is too young to take care of himself and could end
up in the hands of Anna's crazy mother-in-law. I think
this posting is spot on.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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barbara:
This is excellent. No one should ever underestimate the
bond between a mother and her child - especially when the
child is too young to take care of himself and could end
up in the hands of Anna's crazy mother-in-law. I think
this posting is spot on.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from abbasjoy
This is another sad chapter, but there are glimpses of hope, as Anna struggles to come out of the coma. You can feel the anxiety and tension yet the anticipation, especially as Michael calls to his mom and she shows some signs of recognition. She is indeed a fighter, and thankfully not the type to allow her circumstances to keep her down.
If people who are being abused do not have strength of will, and someone encouraging them, it is very difficult for them to overcome the abuse, and many end up dead or seriously hurt.
Your conversation flows nicely and you pay a great deal of attention to detail.
Good job as usual.
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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This is another sad chapter, but there are glimpses of hope, as Anna struggles to come out of the coma. You can feel the anxiety and tension yet the anticipation, especially as Michael calls to his mom and she shows some signs of recognition. She is indeed a fighter, and thankfully not the type to allow her circumstances to keep her down.
If people who are being abused do not have strength of will, and someone encouraging them, it is very difficult for them to overcome the abuse, and many end up dead or seriously hurt.
Your conversation flows nicely and you pay a great deal of attention to detail.
Good job as usual.
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from TammyGail
barbara this was yet another great read
your chaper was so compelling and emotional
you pulled me in and kept my full
thanks for the notes as well
as the read always a pleasure
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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barbara this was yet another great read
your chaper was so compelling and emotional
you pulled me in and kept my full
thanks for the notes as well
as the read always a pleasure
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Anna is a fighter, and you're portraying her as such, Barbara. I like it that she didn't just pop up, all awake and sunny at the sound of Michael's voice. Well done. :) nancy
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Anna is a fighter, and you're portraying her as such, Barbara. I like it that she didn't just pop up, all awake and sunny at the sound of Michael's voice. Well done. :) nancy
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bonnie composanto
This is beautifully written. I have not read any of the other chapters, but this writing captivated my interest. I got chills when I read the part about Michael and his mom's responding with her eyes. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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This is beautifully written. I have not read any of the other chapters, but this writing captivated my interest. I got chills when I read the part about Michael and his mom's responding with her eyes. Beautiful.
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you are welcome.
Comment from Anisa-
Poor little guy. Hopefully his mom wakes up soon. Looks like she will. Good job with this chapter. It's written well and ends at a good point.
Diva? Kittens? What?? Lol
Anisa
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Poor little guy. Hopefully his mom wakes up soon. Looks like she will. Good job with this chapter. It's written well and ends at a good point.
Diva? Kittens? What?? Lol
Anisa
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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I adopted two 8 week old kittens, my 16 year old female cat hates them Sorry, some of my fans have been asking how they are doing. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh! Lol. That makes more sense. I'm sure she'll adjust :)
Comment from HPicasso
this is very well written; you did a great job.
This chapter is about Anna that she responds to Michael and also she opens her eyes to look at him in diferent way. I enjoyed reading it. Great emotion expressed here. This is a very nice and romantic story.
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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this is very well written; you did a great job.
This chapter is about Anna that she responds to Michael and also she opens her eyes to look at him in diferent way. I enjoyed reading it. Great emotion expressed here. This is a very nice and romantic story.
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very well done. How confusing this must be to a child as I know it is to a grownup. My dad was in a coma when he passed away. Well written~~Debbie
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Very well done. How confusing this must be to a child as I know it is to a grownup. My dad was in a coma when he passed away. Well written~~Debbie
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from amada
Oh yes, the love of a mother for her child can produce miracles. I really like the twist in here; little Michael, the miracle worker. This is a very moving chapter.
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Oh yes, the love of a mother for her child can produce miracles. I really like the twist in here; little Michael, the miracle worker. This is a very moving chapter.
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.