Comment from vapros

Excellent

Five stars for your clever verse you have named song poem. The concept of a duck in a puddle and a rainbow and then a sunny day combine to complete your piece. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

I am so glad you liked it and your comments are wonderful. Best to you always, Carolyn

Comment from Frank Atwood

Exceptional

Very cute and perky poem/song. Love the color coordination you worked with the picture, background and font color. Just seems to brighten everything up and makes one want to jog along in the rain with it. God bless and keep up the great writing.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

Thank you Frank, for the comments and for the wonderful six stars. It was a fun little project. So glad you liked it, maybe someday you can sing along as you jog. :-) Carolyn

Comment from 9524983

Good

Make it longer and brighter and make it more colorful, that will bring out the poem and you will have a good song too. You can make up music either on the piano or another instrument. You can make a big difference. Send me the music.

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

Thanks for your encouragement, I will work on adding more. (As far as the colorful, I'm sure you didn't mean a brighter picture :-) You will be hearing from me. Carolyn

Comment from Zinnia48

Excellent

This poem is fun to read. I like the rhythm, rhyme, and overall perky mood. However I almost didn't read it because the green on yellow was so glaring! I needed something happy tonight, and this poem was it. thanks for sharing. Caroline

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

Thanks I am changing it. The sunshiny day was to bright. :-) I am glad you like it. Carolyn

reply by Zinnia48 on 08-Apr-2013

Thanks from my aging eyes! Caroline

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Goodness girl you blinded me with fluorescent yellow - wait till I get my sun glasses.
Lots of rain my area too, then freezing rain spring is on it way ....right??? Great watery and fun light read.
Thanks for the smiles I enjoyed them.
Maureen


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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

Got your attention, eh? Thanks for the cute review, I am glad you enjoyed it. Do you really think I should tone it down a bit? :-0 Carolyn

reply by Maureen's Pen on 08-Apr-2013

Nope, why should I be the only one with burned retinas????? Kidding:D
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me