Where I am Found
Discovering what my home means to me25 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
Beautiful write girl and a great feeling of accomplishment too. Wonderful use of words to describe your home such as caviar and peanut butter.
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Beautiful write girl and a great feeling of accomplishment too. Wonderful use of words to describe your home such as caviar and peanut butter.
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from Frankeddy
Good descriptive poem of your home.
Well thought out and well written expressing your emotions.
Very good accompanying picture.
All presented in a bright clear setting.
Well done, Frankeddy
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Good descriptive poem of your home.
Well thought out and well written expressing your emotions.
Very good accompanying picture.
All presented in a bright clear setting.
Well done, Frankeddy
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from healfromwithin
I like your poem and the things that you find inviting and of value in your home.
some suggestions:
refuse. (maybe "refuge")
.(fewer things; fewer problems). - I'd take out of parentheses
Nicely done. (can I come over and hang out a while?:)
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I like your poem and the things that you find inviting and of value in your home.
some suggestions:
refuse. (maybe "refuge")
.(fewer things; fewer problems). - I'd take out of parentheses
Nicely done. (can I come over and hang out a while?:)
Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
Oh Loanna, I loved your poem, I know that cosy feeling when your are surrounded by your favorite creations, and say "Im home." I feel also that small is ideal, we do not need to have big places unless we can have a big family maids etc.
I would love to join you for a glass of wine, and talk to the early hours of the morning about LIFE and of course poetry.
Well done. Mary
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Oh Loanna, I loved your poem, I know that cosy feeling when your are surrounded by your favorite creations, and say "Im home." I feel also that small is ideal, we do not need to have big places unless we can have a big family maids etc.
I would love to join you for a glass of wine, and talk to the early hours of the morning about LIFE and of course poetry.
Well done. Mary
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Comment Written 02-May-2014
Comment from tfawcus
This encapsulates all that a home really is. Mine is all that you describe, even to the extent of being a refuse tip, though I think perhaps you meant 'refuge' in your case. I was particularly struck by your opening, "somewhere between what was and what is possible".
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This encapsulates all that a home really is. Mine is all that you describe, even to the extent of being a refuse tip, though I think perhaps you meant 'refuge' in your case. I was particularly struck by your opening, "somewhere between what was and what is possible".
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Comment Written 02-May-2014