The Discarded
200 word story22 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
in used 200 words you show the terror within my eyes of what could happen to the kidnapped two hundred girls.
The same can happen like it did to nineteen year old--
a used up whore. No one will claim or wants her anymore.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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Hello author
in used 200 words you show the terror within my eyes of what could happen to the kidnapped two hundred girls.
The same can happen like it did to nineteen year old--
a used up whore. No one will claim or wants her anymore.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-May-2014
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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Some of these girls if they live, not necessarily their best choice, will never be claimed by family and soon forgotten.
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Yes that is the worst thing that happens-
these girls are forgotten
Comment from Spitfire
No doubt about it. You are a fantastic writer. Smart woman to pick up on a current and horrible tragedy. In one sentence you target the cruelty "We're not worth food." Wow and double wow.
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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No doubt about it. You are a fantastic writer. Smart woman to pick up on a current and horrible tragedy. In one sentence you target the cruelty "We're not worth food." Wow and double wow.
Comment Written 09-May-2014
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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Wow--right back at you. I am totally stunned to receive a 6 star accolade from you for this short piece but none-the-less still humbled and grateful. Thank you.