Comment from Angel Debbie

Exceptional

Beautiful this one has my vote in the contest!!
Great meaning in this write with only a few words said.
The way it is presented is excellent also.
Great contest entry for the 2-4-2 contest. Good luck I think you got this hands down in my book!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014

Thanks, Angel...

Comment from The Death

Excellent

Hi, mystery writer.

It's a well-written spiritual poem for the prompt. I think most of the readers will get this even without looking at the notes.

You've beautifully summarized that how He loves us selflessly so that He gave us Jesus. And Jesus literally saved the world from leading to abyss. Good use if S consonance here.

Good luck! :)

Regards,
Anupam

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014

Thanks...

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

You are right author, no explanation needed, These have to be the most powerful heartrending words I have read to date in this competition, very spiritual and so beautiful! I wish you good luck!

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 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014

Thanks, Eric...

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery. Good luck in your contest.

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 Comment Written 29-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014

Thank you.