Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "love upon desert sands"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Dawn Munro
Mm, mmm, this is sensual and romantic, flows like melted honey and paints a lovely mental image. Add to that your gorgeous choice of imagery and it's the whole package! Nicely done! :)
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Mm, mmm, this is sensual and romantic, flows like melted honey and paints a lovely mental image. Add to that your gorgeous choice of imagery and it's the whole package! Nicely done! :)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Thanks Dawn for this
Comment from Bryana
Another beautiful poem my friend. You certainly have an excellent inspiring muse. I specially like the last two lines...
Drawing tight pressing your soul to intertwine with mine
we move as one under the stars from this evening so divine.
Have a wonderful week.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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Another beautiful poem my friend. You certainly have an excellent inspiring muse. I specially like the last two lines...
Drawing tight pressing your soul to intertwine with mine
we move as one under the stars from this evening so divine.
Have a wonderful week.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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thank you Bryana
Comment from Oatmeal
dw,
Well chosen words, colorful arrangement and wonderfully decorated thoughts. Very well formatted and full of descriptive narrations.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no typos or SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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dw,
Well chosen words, colorful arrangement and wonderfully decorated thoughts. Very well formatted and full of descriptive narrations.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no typos or SPAG.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014
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again thank you Oatmeal for your review
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dw,
You are welcome. I like your writings.
Love you,
Camille
Comment from Linda England Bonam
Another beautiful poem with spot on rhythm and rhymes. I love the way you write and you do not disappoint!
Beautiful picture completes the piece.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Another beautiful poem with spot on rhythm and rhymes. I love the way you write and you do not disappoint!
Beautiful picture completes the piece.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thank you Ms Linda
Comment from nomi338
Sounds like decadent fun. These intriguing words so expertly expressed puts me into the mood to give me wife that certain look, while she gives me back that "nothing doing look." Thanks for lighting a fire so near to a wet blanket. Fire lit, fire extinguished.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sounds like decadent fun. These intriguing words so expertly expressed puts me into the mood to give me wife that certain look, while she gives me back that "nothing doing look." Thanks for lighting a fire so near to a wet blanket. Fire lit, fire extinguished.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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welcome nomi
Comment from Acquired Taste
Beautifully seductive work. It takes the reader slowly through a truly romantic time with each other. Visual with legs of silk and body responds from fingertips. Very enjoyable read. AT=/
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Beautifully seductive work. It takes the reader slowly through a truly romantic time with each other. Visual with legs of silk and body responds from fingertips. Very enjoyable read. AT=/
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thank you AT
Comment from LIJ Red
No short reviews. Can't say five stars, bye. Okay. Five stars, and the remark that your poem makes me think of Fitzgerald's Khayyam...paradise enow...
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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No short reviews. Can't say five stars, bye. Okay. Five stars, and the remark that your poem makes me think of Fitzgerald's Khayyam...paradise enow...
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thank you for the short review lol
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Gary, you are on a roll aren't you? Great use of allitteration in this poem, I also found this poem very romantic. It also reminded me of our much loved departed Gunglo Great job, Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Dear Gary, you are on a roll aren't you? Great use of allitteration in this poem, I also found this poem very romantic. It also reminded me of our much loved departed Gunglo Great job, Shirley
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thank you for this Shirley she would have liked this one
Comment from acerisestory
Lovely and beautifully seductive, Gary! The imagery you've used is very compelling. "Legs of silk." Nice. Your rhyming, as in your other poems (intermittent), is a nice touch, adding to the flow.
You've made great use of alliteration in tender/thrills; slow/spine/soul. One spag: angel's (singular) rather than angels'.
Thank you for sharing, Gary. Take care.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Lovely and beautifully seductive, Gary! The imagery you've used is very compelling. "Legs of silk." Nice. Your rhyming, as in your other poems (intermittent), is a nice touch, adding to the flow.
You've made great use of alliteration in tender/thrills; slow/spine/soul. One spag: angel's (singular) rather than angels'.
Thank you for sharing, Gary. Take care.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thank you for this I will make the change
Gary
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You are welcome, Gary. Alana
Comment from livelylinda
Gary: another side to you. Writing of love, making love, seduction, the power of slow touching, etc. And, you have put it all together for an 'evening so divine'. Very nice my good fellow! Linda
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Gary: another side to you. Writing of love, making love, seduction, the power of slow touching, etc. And, you have put it all together for an 'evening so divine'. Very nice my good fellow! Linda
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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thank you Linda for this