Streaks in the Night
Have you heard lightning make crackling noises? 3/5/323 total reviews
Comment from Titan Black
Yes, that's one of the ways, that
God talks to us, is through thunder
and lightening. You did good with
this write. Keep writing.
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Yes, that's one of the ways, that
God talks to us, is through thunder
and lightening. You did good with
this write. Keep writing.
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Comment from mrskristinball
Each word in this poem is perfectly presented for the topic of lightening storms. Also, very creative perspective concerning the theme of 'air' since the sounds of these light shows move through the air with an 'eerie noise'. Superb work and spectacular image!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Each word in this poem is perfectly presented for the topic of lightening storms. Also, very creative perspective concerning the theme of 'air' since the sounds of these light shows move through the air with an 'eerie noise'. Superb work and spectacular image!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I appreciate your time/effort reviewing my poem. I am overwhelmed.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Your short little poem is written well. It follows the rules and the picture is great. It brings an image to the reader's mind. Your description of the flash of lightening in very good. Nice job, my friend.
Always with respect,
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Your short little poem is written well. It follows the rules and the picture is great. It brings an image to the reader's mind. Your description of the flash of lightening in very good. Nice job, my friend.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I appreciate your time/effort in reviewing my poem.