The Animal Doctor
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Comment from Jay Squires
The narrative, the dialogue, the pace, the suspense, the intrigue ... who could ask for better.
Just had a few concerns, one major, one minor:
But only if you stay away from him." [Isn't this exactly the opposite of what you intended to say?]
she had just showed off her winning poker hand [had just SHOWN off]
A great chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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The narrative, the dialogue, the pace, the suspense, the intrigue ... who could ask for better.
Just had a few concerns, one major, one minor:
But only if you stay away from him." [Isn't this exactly the opposite of what you intended to say?]
she had just showed off her winning poker hand [had just SHOWN off]
A great chapter.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Jay. Will make correction of showed, not sure about the other. I'll check and see what you're speaking off.
Comment from onebrit
OMG, this woman drives me batty....just how many lives does she need to tread on until she gets her way....but Nathan is weak too, he needs to decide which one he wants and work on that relationship, cant have both. I am so enjoying this!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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OMG, this woman drives me batty....just how many lives does she need to tread on until she gets her way....but Nathan is weak too, he needs to decide which one he wants and work on that relationship, cant have both. I am so enjoying this!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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LOL thank you for showing so much emotion about this story. I really appreciate your interest and enjoyment. Well--Grace hasn't given him much of a choice, has she? Thank you for this wonderful review, my dear.
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is such an excellent story. I found it interesting that the girl would go right to her real father and speak so harsh. Often when people find out about their real parent, they try to impress them or they want nothing to do with them. I guess, without thinking, that is what Margaret is doing here for the love of Nathan. Well written.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This is such an excellent story. I found it interesting that the girl would go right to her real father and speak so harsh. Often when people find out about their real parent, they try to impress them or they want nothing to do with them. I guess, without thinking, that is what Margaret is doing here for the love of Nathan. Well written.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Wow, thank you so much, Drew..not just for the stars but for your on-going interest in my book. I really appreciate you.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! Margaret is really bold for a woman of that time... or any time. Maybe Nate should just pretend to want her, meet her in a stable, and inject her with some powerful horse drug that will kill her. Back then I doubt if they could find anyting with autopsy. But then Nate's not the murdering kind, darn it. :)
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Wow! Margaret is really bold for a woman of that time... or any time. Maybe Nate should just pretend to want her, meet her in a stable, and inject her with some powerful horse drug that will kill her. Back then I doubt if they could find anyting with autopsy. But then Nate's not the murdering kind, darn it. :)
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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LOL, I love you, Phyllis...LOL Thanks for hanging in there with this story Phyllis. No, unfortunately Nate is not a killer. Though I don't many of the readers would be angry with him if he did kill Margaret.
Comment from c_lucas
home breakers are a selfish lot. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good imagery.
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home breakers are a selfish lot. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good imagery.
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Charlie.
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You're welcome, Amahra. Charlie