The FanStory Redemption
A Short Story32 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
Funny! mate!! Not even quirky or weird just FUNNY! I relate to so much especially...."it strange that within a week of joining this place you are addicted to it? I can find you here any hour of the day or night." ...hehe I relate to this mate for sure are you the same?
Hey chapter 17 of my autobiography has some extra stuff. I was in a new group on Face book we are talking about illegals people marrying foreigners then when the foreigners get citizen ship they split have a look there are rewards on it. (If you can get them as a regular (or irregular and we are right hehe!) with me or just look anyway.
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Funny! mate!! Not even quirky or weird just FUNNY! I relate to so much especially...."it strange that within a week of joining this place you are addicted to it? I can find you here any hour of the day or night." ...hehe I relate to this mate for sure are you the same?
Hey chapter 17 of my autobiography has some extra stuff. I was in a new group on Face book we are talking about illegals people marrying foreigners then when the foreigners get citizen ship they split have a look there are rewards on it. (If you can get them as a regular (or irregular and we are right hehe!) with me or just look anyway.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from Sasha
Yes, you are insane but I still love you. I got a real kick out of this one and think you did a great job with your own contest. I think I've read all the entries so far and cannot wait for the vote. I wish you all the best in this one my fine feathered crazy friend.
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Yes, you are insane but I still love you. I got a real kick out of this one and think you did a great job with your own contest. I think I've read all the entries so far and cannot wait for the vote. I wish you all the best in this one my fine feathered crazy friend.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from LIJ Red
ElvisPTC's girlfriend was in to poetry or into poetry? and about Sandy boy, Tom had him mailing copy and confused me, but that's easy. Some of this has enough truth to sting...makes it excellent...
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ElvisPTC's girlfriend was in to poetry or into poetry? and about Sandy boy, Tom had him mailing copy and confused me, but that's easy. Some of this has enough truth to sting...makes it excellent...
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is a very clever write, Mikey. A great entry for the contest. You've done amazing things on this site since joining. And I admire your discipline, which added to your skill, made you #2 in short stories on the site. That is an amazing testimony to your writing ability. I hope 2015, is just as productive for you.
Good luck in the contest!
:) Bev
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This is a very clever write, Mikey. A great entry for the contest. You've done amazing things on this site since joining. And I admire your discipline, which added to your skill, made you #2 in short stories on the site. That is an amazing testimony to your writing ability. I hope 2015, is just as productive for you.
Good luck in the contest!
:) Bev
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from tfawcus
What a delicious parody of the Shawshank Redemption! I know what you mean, too. I swore I'd quit in 2015, but there's no escape. I'm already two poems in towards another round on the treadmill and it's only day one. Who the hell writes poetry on New Year's Day? I've still got blood dripping out of my eyes from last night. Damn Dean!
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What a delicious parody of the Shawshank Redemption! I know what you mean, too. I swore I'd quit in 2015, but there's no escape. I'm already two poems in towards another round on the treadmill and it's only day one. Who the hell writes poetry on New Year's Day? I've still got blood dripping out of my eyes from last night. Damn Dean!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from livelylinda
michaelcahill: Listen to your wife . . . Having just spent 2 1/2 weeks down with the fiendish Florida flu, I thought I recognized that stuffy headed barrage of diseased words in this story. When you are well again and your head clear, you might notice that it isn't genius material. LOLOLOLOL But, it was a fun read; just keep listening to your wife! Linda
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michaelcahill: Listen to your wife . . . Having just spent 2 1/2 weeks down with the fiendish Florida flu, I thought I recognized that stuffy headed barrage of diseased words in this story. When you are well again and your head clear, you might notice that it isn't genius material. LOLOLOLOL But, it was a fun read; just keep listening to your wife! Linda
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I want some of what you are taking.
The hallucinations must be great.
Really a fun read and the interracrion was graat.
Nicely put together,,,good flow
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I want some of what you are taking.
The hallucinations must be great.
Really a fun read and the interracrion was graat.
Nicely put together,,,good flow
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from amahra
Brilliant! And Morgan Freeman in Shawshank is my favorite prison movie of all times. This was really funny and I enjoyed reading it. Just a few things below:
Me? I'm Theo Sorryass[LOL]
who was in to poetry.[into not in to]
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Brilliant! And Morgan Freeman in Shawshank is my favorite prison movie of all times. This was really funny and I enjoyed reading it. Just a few things below:
Me? I'm Theo Sorryass[LOL]
who was in to poetry.[into not in to]
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
OMG!!! Insane is the word. Ha! This is genius. One of my favorite movies and this is filled with subtle referrances. Lots of sense here too mixed in. How dooooo we get sooo addicted to this??? One of many strong entries. The one to beat. IMHO
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OMG!!! Insane is the word. Ha! This is genius. One of my favorite movies and this is filled with subtle referrances. Lots of sense here too mixed in. How dooooo we get sooo addicted to this??? One of many strong entries. The one to beat. IMHO
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015
Comment from CR Delport
Mikey, from one lifer to another, this is friggin brilliant!! You make it sound so innocent while you're dishing out side swipes left, right, and centre :) Between your story, and the "other" Michael, I don't think the rest have a chance :) Great job.
Have an awesome year.
Christelle.
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Mikey, from one lifer to another, this is friggin brilliant!! You make it sound so innocent while you're dishing out side swipes left, right, and centre :) Between your story, and the "other" Michael, I don't think the rest have a chance :) Great job.
Have an awesome year.
Christelle.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2015