Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this acrostic about the way we are given a choice and the consequences of each choice. I choose the doorway to Heaven. I spotted one error--beware of what you seek instead of your seek. good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes. Thanks also for bringing the error to my attention. Blessings...............................

Comment from twesberry

Exceptional

The simplicity of it all that is easy to understand. Not being a poet, who understands the mechanics of it all I search the understanding of what a sixth grader might write. And yes its spiritual that which even God does understand. I didn't need to try and dissect, that which I cant do. Thank for your wisdom.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for such a stunning review and the six star rating. You have truly made my day for all praises and honor goes to God! Blessings my friend....................................

reply by twesberry on 09-Sep-2015

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

I enjoyed your theme and think that you chose it well to go with the required subject for the Acrostic contest. It does make its own statement and you carried it out well with the limited way you have to write. Good job and good luck.

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015

Thanks so much for your review and best wishes. Blessings..........................