Reflections Of Color
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Comment from MelB
I enjoyed reading this poem about a love lost. A very catchy opening line with the riding rainbows phrase. A good poem and lyrics of reflection on what went wrong from his POV.
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I enjoyed reading this poem about a love lost. A very catchy opening line with the riding rainbows phrase. A good poem and lyrics of reflection on what went wrong from his POV.
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Comment from OnyxSapphire78
This is a very real and very sad poem about love lost. The one that got away perhaps. When the relationship ends, the memories sometimes become stronger and we analyze our part in the failing of it all. It hurts in a way that seems to take us over from time to time. Even when the healing has begun and acceptance is just around the corner, something reminds us of that love that we lost.
I loved this poem and even the sadness that it brought. I especially love d the way you ended.
I'm not looking back in anger at places that we've been
You gave your heart and soul to me, and, I gave them back again
Tonight I'm riding rainbows that always go away
Looking for tomorrow in every yesterday
No anger here. I like this sentiment. I also really enjoyed the repeating lines.
Thank you for sharing. Good luck and happy writing!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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This is a very real and very sad poem about love lost. The one that got away perhaps. When the relationship ends, the memories sometimes become stronger and we analyze our part in the failing of it all. It hurts in a way that seems to take us over from time to time. Even when the healing has begun and acceptance is just around the corner, something reminds us of that love that we lost.
I loved this poem and even the sadness that it brought. I especially love d the way you ended.
I'm not looking back in anger at places that we've been
You gave your heart and soul to me, and, I gave them back again
Tonight I'm riding rainbows that always go away
Looking for tomorrow in every yesterday
No anger here. I like this sentiment. I also really enjoyed the repeating lines.
Thank you for sharing. Good luck and happy writing!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated. Some time love lost is the one remembered most.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Brett
_ Well expressed lyrics.
_ Super opening line to set the scene.
_ Awesome artwork as well.
_ A truly enjoyable read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Hi, Brett
_ Well expressed lyrics.
_ Super opening line to set the scene.
_ Awesome artwork as well.
_ A truly enjoyable read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
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Comment from fafa
Does the love have these situations whereyou do not explain the reason to yourself?,your poem contains beautiful metaphorsthat sadden and give the frame of mind ofthe poet on having written it,congratulations, I liked very much that'swhy the six, a hug
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Does the love have these situations whereyou do not explain the reason to yourself?,your poem contains beautiful metaphorsthat sadden and give the frame of mind ofthe poet on having written it,congratulations, I liked very much that'swhy the six, a hug
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments, support, and the 6 Stars are all appreciated.
Comment from judiverse
This is great. I love the image of riding rainbows that always go away. It seems that after many years he's still longing for the one that got away. No matter how she may have treated him, memories won't go away, even though he wants help in finding a new love. Excellent flow in this, and I can imagine it being sung. Definitely a "6." Happy trails. judi
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This is great. I love the image of riding rainbows that always go away. It seems that after many years he's still longing for the one that got away. No matter how she may have treated him, memories won't go away, even though he wants help in finding a new love. Excellent flow in this, and I can imagine it being sung. Definitely a "6." Happy trails. judi
Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Some times riding rainbows is all you can do. Your comments, support, and the 6 Stars are all appreciated.
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You're very welcome. A great song. judi
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Very well written poem and regret comes always too late, but the memories that stays behind can be made better to soothe your pain. Color in the rainbows but remember the next time to keep the rainbow in your hand.
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Very well written poem and regret comes always too late, but the memories that stays behind can be made better to soothe your pain. Color in the rainbows but remember the next time to keep the rainbow in your hand.
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You don't have to rhyme to get a wonderful piece and you don't need me to tell you that.
Excellently done bringing out the feelings and emotions as only I have seen you do in your pieces.
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You don't have to rhyme to get a wonderful piece and you don't need me to tell you that.
Excellently done bringing out the feelings and emotions as only I have seen you do in your pieces.
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Comment from robyn corum
This was a very nice song, Brett! I enjoyed it very much and I think others will as well. The under-lying message is one most of us can relate to at some time or other. Thanks for sharing!
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This was a very nice song, Brett! I enjoyed it very much and I think others will as well. The under-lying message is one most of us can relate to at some time or other. Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2015
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