Reflections Of Color
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Comment from ericawrites
This is a great song, I would love to hear it put to music.
I can picture it as a country and western ballad, sung by Garth Brooks!
I hope that suggestion doesn't offend.
Perhaps if the second verse was to be repeated, as a chorus, you could call it "Stepping Out Again" ?
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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This is a great song, I would love to hear it put to music.
I can picture it as a country and western ballad, sung by Garth Brooks!
I hope that suggestion doesn't offend.
Perhaps if the second verse was to be repeated, as a chorus, you could call it "Stepping Out Again" ?
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Thanks for the title suggestion. Will consider it. If Garth Brooks was Country may ask him to record it. With the exception of a few Performers such as George Strait, Alan, Jackson, and early Brad Paisley, most of the rest of the Modern Day singers are simply Cookie Cutter Cowboys. Your comments and support are appreciated.
Comment from alvina224224
Well done, author, I don't know if this would qualify for the contest that stipulates re-written lyrics. I read that as re-writing already well-known lyrics. However, I would like to suggest titles - Moving On or
Missing girl
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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Well done, author, I don't know if this would qualify for the contest that stipulates re-written lyrics. I read that as re-writing already well-known lyrics. However, I would like to suggest titles - Moving On or
Missing girl
Comment Written 11-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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These are original lyrics written 15 years ago. Not intended for any re-written lyrics contest. Will consider your suggested titles. Glad you enjoyed them.
Comment from CobiDawn
I think some good titles would be "Traveling Memories," or "Mile after Mile". Very catchy lyrics, deep , sad, adventurous, yet full of regrets.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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I think some good titles would be "Traveling Memories," or "Mile after Mile". Very catchy lyrics, deep , sad, adventurous, yet full of regrets.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Will consider the title suggestions. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Any time Brett
Comment from snooker155
love it the heart of America put into verse your writing is a real pleasure to read you have the power to capture a readers attention with everything that you write about a truly gifted poet and very talented man thank you for sharing from snooker155x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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love it the heart of America put into verse your writing is a real pleasure to read you have the power to capture a readers attention with everything that you write about a truly gifted poet and very talented man thank you for sharing from snooker155x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Interesting lyrics lost love and a roaming heart (that could be your title-a roaming heart). The well chosen words evoke a sense of loneliness and wasted motion. Solid rhyme and meter. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Hello :)
Interesting lyrics lost love and a roaming heart (that could be your title-a roaming heart). The well chosen words evoke a sense of loneliness and wasted motion. Solid rhyme and meter. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Will consider your title suggestion. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Brett
_ Yep, comes a time when you got to cut your losses and let that man go.
_ Just wash him right outta your hair.
_ Easy flowing story. Enjoyed the read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Hi, Brett
_ Yep, comes a time when you got to cut your losses and let that man go.
_ Just wash him right outta your hair.
_ Easy flowing story. Enjoyed the read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from MelB
I like things simple, so a title like Gone or Dead and Gone come to mind or even Busted Loose from the last line. Another fine poem about a guy on the road and a lady whose been betrayed.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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I like things simple, so a title like Gone or Dead and Gone come to mind or even Busted Loose from the last line. Another fine poem about a guy on the road and a lady whose been betrayed.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Untitled is still a nice one to use and it has been used all these years, what is the hurry to change now?
Nicely done and one to sing, but add a few.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Untitled is still a nice one to use and it has been used all these years, what is the hurry to change now?
Nicely done and one to sing, but add a few.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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I am working on adding more.
I have 42 All Time Best lyrics posted in my portfolio right now.
I will be adding even more.
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
How about 'the night Atlanta burned down' for the title, that is the starting line of the poem and everything flows from there on.(just a suggestion)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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How about 'the night Atlanta burned down' for the title, that is the starting line of the poem and everything flows from there on.(just a suggestion)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Will consider the recommendarion. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from royowen
Looks like a potential balls come blues song, with excellent lyric,I word have thought the title would be reasonably obvious, how about "Atlanta burning". Great lyrics it's very lyrical, excellent depth, elegantly written, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Looks like a potential balls come blues song, with excellent lyric,I word have thought the title would be reasonably obvious, how about "Atlanta burning". Great lyrics it's very lyrical, excellent depth, elegantly written, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Will consider the recommendation. Your comments and support appreciated.
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Most welcome