Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Good Time Man"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from doggymad
Very enjoyable work if a trifle on the sad side. Love has to flow both ways to work.
This tells of what can happen in such a poignant way that the reader almost feels sorry for the wrongdoer
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Very enjoyable work if a trifle on the sad side. Love has to flow both ways to work.
This tells of what can happen in such a poignant way that the reader almost feels sorry for the wrongdoer
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
Again you've written nice lyrics. So now you have another great song to sing.
I enjoyed reading it like everything that you write. You are a very talented man and a nice friend.
Kat
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Hi Brett,
Again you've written nice lyrics. So now you have another great song to sing.
I enjoyed reading it like everything that you write. You are a very talented man and a nice friend.
Kat
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
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I like everything you write.
Comment from Ricky1024
To never be able to do the things that your heart shall be...
The 'Goodtime Man is this you see?
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.
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To never be able to do the things that your heart shall be...
The 'Goodtime Man is this you see?
Thanks,
Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Good love poem to the one who left you, because you jumped the fence. Remorse is a good thing but it always come too late, think before you jump the fence again, if she is going to take you back. NS Check stanza two, if it was not intentional your second line have two times 'that'.
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Good love poem to the one who left you, because you jumped the fence. Remorse is a good thing but it always come too late, think before you jump the fence again, if she is going to take you back. NS Check stanza two, if it was not intentional your second line have two times 'that'.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
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Comment from LeithAnne
I have used a lot of songs to create imagery and poetry for people as a gift. Often the song words are amazingly incoherent. I really like the flow of this song, It has a country feel and would love to hear it with music. I would like to see a repeated chorus that holds the actual theme of the song together, It appears too short in its current form.
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I have used a lot of songs to create imagery and poetry for people as a gift. Often the song words are amazingly incoherent. I really like the flow of this song, It has a country feel and would love to hear it with music. I would like to see a repeated chorus that holds the actual theme of the song together, It appears too short in its current form.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
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The last stanza could be used as the chorus. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from barkingdog
I can see how the dancing lizard represents the good time character in your poem.
Free and fun loving. There's no one quite like him. She fell for his charms, and he broke her heart.
Fine story and realistic voice.
:) ellen
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I can see how the dancing lizard represents the good time character in your poem.
Free and fun loving. There's no one quite like him. She fell for his charms, and he broke her heart.
Fine story and realistic voice.
:) ellen
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Comment from Bill Schott
I can't decide whether the speaking sounds like he could take her or leave her or if he's smitten and unfamiliar with the feeling. Fun lyrics that would probably be just as fun to sing.
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I can't decide whether the speaking sounds like he could take her or leave her or if he's smitten and unfamiliar with the feeling. Fun lyrics that would probably be just as fun to sing.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
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He wants to be a party animal, and have the girl, too. Love does not work that way. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.