Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Get Away"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from patcelaw
This Brett is classic country lyrics. I suppose it could make it to the top of the charts. I wish you a Very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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This Brett is classic country lyrics. I suppose it could make it to the top of the charts. I wish you a Very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Patricia
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Comment from William Ross
Very nice well written free verse it's hard when a loved one is on the road for days on end. Good job on this, thanks for sharing nice work.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Very nice well written free verse it's hard when a loved one is on the road for days on end. Good job on this, thanks for sharing nice work.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Comment from Domino 2
I think it's usual in a song to have 2 or 3 verses followed by a chorus, and so in in the same pattern and same chorus.
I find the chorus missing here, but I did enjoy the verses with the theme of 'all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy' - or something like that.
Unfortunately, we cant usually choose our leisure time when we need to earn a living, but I still like your carefree attitude as to what should take priority.
Bets wishes, Ray.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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I think it's usual in a song to have 2 or 3 verses followed by a chorus, and so in in the same pattern and same chorus.
I find the chorus missing here, but I did enjoy the verses with the theme of 'all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy' - or something like that.
Unfortunately, we cant usually choose our leisure time when we need to earn a living, but I still like your carefree attitude as to what should take priority.
Bets wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Comment from CEO2020
The Life of many. This poem reflects of the life of many on this site. While the emotions of the character is felt from beginning to end, my stand-out is paragraph three and four -
"All this hard work is killing me
Wait till tomorrow to set me free
I'm gonna give you all the love I can
Don't say goodbye to this hard working man
Now, I got problems up the ying-yang
A big stack of bills I can not pay
Whatever happened to yesterday
I need some time to play"
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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The Life of many. This poem reflects of the life of many on this site. While the emotions of the character is felt from beginning to end, my stand-out is paragraph three and four -
"All this hard work is killing me
Wait till tomorrow to set me free
I'm gonna give you all the love I can
Don't say goodbye to this hard working man
Now, I got problems up the ying-yang
A big stack of bills I can not pay
Whatever happened to yesterday
I need some time to play"
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh the flow is just perfect enough to make it a sing/song read. Nice and fun to read and a story to boot.
A love to die for
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Oh the flow is just perfect enough to make it a sing/song read. Nice and fun to read and a story to boot.
A love to die for
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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I wrote these lyrics several years ago, and sing-song is very good description of them. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Lovely song lyrics. Tired of work the factory is closing for Christmas time and time off to spend with your loved one, though you are far apart you will build a bridge to get to your loved one.
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Lovely song lyrics. Tired of work the factory is closing for Christmas time and time off to spend with your loved one, though you are far apart you will build a bridge to get to your loved one.
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Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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