Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "There Goes Tomorrow"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from William Ross
This is very nice a great write on the free verse and style with just enough rhyme and gives a great rhythm. wonderful poem of love lost. have a great day.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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This is very nice a great write on the free verse and style with just enough rhyme and gives a great rhythm. wonderful poem of love lost. have a great day.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Comment from nancyrabbrose
i found your poem, by happenstance, this morning after my sweetheart's visit.
Your lyrics are quite good, they flow, they know your heart (the heart of the poet/lyricist).
Picking Bridal Veil Falls is brilliant, as you know, because of the title of the falls and the hope for a kind of marriage that the poet seems to be seeking.
Well done. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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i found your poem, by happenstance, this morning after my sweetheart's visit.
Your lyrics are quite good, they flow, they know your heart (the heart of the poet/lyricist).
Picking Bridal Veil Falls is brilliant, as you know, because of the title of the falls and the hope for a kind of marriage that the poet seems to be seeking.
Well done. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Comment from Ben Colder
Good strong worded free- style. I enjoy writing free- style. Seems one can let the words come from nowhere. Good one Brett.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Good strong worded free- style. I enjoy writing free- style. Seems one can let the words come from nowhere. Good one Brett.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Domino 2
I find it hard to appreciate just song lyrics without accompanying music, as I reckon the lyrics are the easy part, with respect, and when one listens to a song, one is first hooked on the tune before we bother to listen to the lyrics - even if we bother at all.
I wrote lots of song lyrics a few years back and strummed my four chords on my Spanish guitar in accompaniment. I had a friend who produced music in his studio, and he added lots based on my basic melody. It was fun, but...surprise, surprise, I wasn't 'discovered after pitching it to various labels. ;-)
Your lyrics seem fine here, though they're lacking a chorus, and of course, a 'middle eight', so appear just as a poem, with respect.
Good luck with it, and have fun.
Best wishes, Ray.
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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I find it hard to appreciate just song lyrics without accompanying music, as I reckon the lyrics are the easy part, with respect, and when one listens to a song, one is first hooked on the tune before we bother to listen to the lyrics - even if we bother at all.
I wrote lots of song lyrics a few years back and strummed my four chords on my Spanish guitar in accompaniment. I had a friend who produced music in his studio, and he added lots based on my basic melody. It was fun, but...surprise, surprise, I wasn't 'discovered after pitching it to various labels. ;-)
Your lyrics seem fine here, though they're lacking a chorus, and of course, a 'middle eight', so appear just as a poem, with respect.
Good luck with it, and have fun.
Best wishes, Ray.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
It is hard and painful to let tomorrow go, but sometimes it is better that way. It will save a lot of pain and maybe there is something better waiting around the next corner, we can never know what tomorrow holds.
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It is hard and painful to let tomorrow go, but sometimes it is better that way. It will save a lot of pain and maybe there is something better waiting around the next corner, we can never know what tomorrow holds.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
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Comment from misscookie
I enjoyed reading your poem
I could feel the love, compassion and loneliness within each line.
This will make a good blues and country song my friend.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I enjoyed reading your poem
I could feel the love, compassion and loneliness within each line.
This will make a good blues and country song my friend.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Thank you miss cookie. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Your comments and support appreciated.
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You're very welcome, have a nice day.
Cookie