Comment from Joy Graham

Exceptional

This is an enjoyable story :)

- I apologize for jumping in late.

- I'm confused how the ants can communicate with a human and bring back samples of food from the desert?

- I love the name Ayala :)

- you have my attention and I hope to read more chapters of this interesting story

- Keep writing, you have that special talent!

Joy xx

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thank you for the wonderful six star review, Joy.
The Ants aren't really ants, they are part of a cult in the desert where there are 12 different houses named after 12 different desert animals and insects. Each house is given a job related to the name of the animals the represent.
Archie ended up trapped in the desert and held hostage by these secretive people.
They are part of an experiment to strengthen the human race. The scientists who set it up have a charter from the Government to perform this experiment, and don't want any outsiders to carry the knowledge of the place away.
That's why they won't let Archie, who is a United States Senator from Texas, and the son of the President, get away.
Archie's playing nice until he can figure out how to escape. He now has a confederate!

Thanks for joining in!!
Rhonda

reply by Joy Graham on 03-Jan-2017

Thank you for this background info! I'm sure I read your first chapter a while ago. You have an awesome story idea here :)

reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thank you, Joy!
I wasn't sure how much of it you had read, so figured you could use a review. I should probably post it on the chapter!

Rhonda

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Excellently written and the interaction is very good and adds to the story. It is good to see him finally changing and maybe even becoming a real human, you know what I mean.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thank you, Barb, yeah Archie has been functioning with a concussion, and those are not fun. He's recovering to the point to start taking charge of his situation.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

An interesting chapter.
First Koko is trying to get Archie married then we find out she's pregnant.
Oh my!
A lot of intrigue and mystery surround this group at Hokee.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully Archive can remain sterile.
Michael

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thank you, Michael, and to be honest, Koko was just trying to get the conversation away from her. It worked briefly. Archie's a forgiving sort though!

Thank for reading and reviewing!

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Oh my, we have a forbidden baby on the way, a couple in love, a planned escape, and a missing guy. This is getting pretty exciting right out of the gate!

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2017

Thank you so much. I'm trying to make it that way, anyway. I appreciate the review and comments!
Take care,
Rhonda