I Guess I'll Be Gettin' More Mutin'
Potlatch Challenge--Triolet27 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Very funny mikey, these two are such over the top characters, that this triolet of yours works well. Unfortunately we get a visual through your words (LOL) Hope you're feeling better soon,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Very funny mikey, these two are such over the top characters, that this triolet of yours works well. Unfortunately we get a visual through your words (LOL) Hope you're feeling better soon,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I suppose it's not the prettiest of pictures. LOL
I couldn't come up with anything pretty, sooooo
Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from tfawcus
Political commentary and satire seems to be the order of the day! This one has an upbeat rhythm and vocabulary choice to counteract the dire warning. A sparkling update of the ancient Triolet form!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Political commentary and satire seems to be the order of the day! This one has an upbeat rhythm and vocabulary choice to counteract the dire warning. A sparkling update of the ancient Triolet form!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hi, Tony
Trying to get back in the swing a little.
So pleased you found this to be fun. Thanks a bunch. mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
Heeeeeehehe!!!!!!
Oh gee, this is exactly how I feel about the whole thing. Bless you for saying itvand saying it in such a hilarious wsy!
No mute from me. I hope you write more like this, you are not alone. This guy is an idiot, it is that simple! NG
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Heeeeeehehe!!!!!!
Oh gee, this is exactly how I feel about the whole thing. Bless you for saying itvand saying it in such a hilarious wsy!
No mute from me. I hope you write more like this, you are not alone. This guy is an idiot, it is that simple! NG
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Well, I've given up being popular so I'll probably continue along in the same vein when it strikes me. LOL
Thanks, you're too kind. michael
Comment from Liberty Justice
Six stars to you Michael. Sorry you're sick. What's the matter? I love your rhymes with hint about politics of Trump and Russia's Putin. Your poem is so musical and amusing made me smile. Hope you get better. lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Six stars to you Michael. Sorry you're sick. What's the matter? I love your rhymes with hint about politics of Trump and Russia's Putin. Your poem is so musical and amusing made me smile. Hope you get better. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hi, Libery!
I don't think it's too serious, it just kind of lingers on.
I so happy it made you smile. What a great review, thanks a million. mikey
Comment from frierajac
This is the stuff of nightmare. You will just have to get over it. It is pretty funny.
It reminds me of a close by neighbor of mine who a few years back confessed a deep romantic attachment to Putin. I don't know if its she who was replaced by Trump
in the affections of him or some other British lady? or
vica- versa? The form is of 8 stress. I wonder about the word coining of Bromancin'.
It sounds like the Spanish word 'broma' meaning joke and a headless 'romance'. With the elisions on the 'r'.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This is the stuff of nightmare. You will just have to get over it. It is pretty funny.
It reminds me of a close by neighbor of mine who a few years back confessed a deep romantic attachment to Putin. I don't know if its she who was replaced by Trump
in the affections of him or some other British lady? or
vica- versa? The form is of 8 stress. I wonder about the word coining of Bromancin'.
It sounds like the Spanish word 'broma' meaning joke and a headless 'romance'. With the elisions on the 'r'.
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Bromance is kind of a new term to denote two males who are extra good buddies. Like a romance between to good "Bros". LOL
I guess Putin has that half-naked man on a horse appeal. HA!
I'm more of a cute gal on a pony type. :)) mikey
Comment from Sasha
I hope you are back on your feet soon. I got a real kick out of this fun, delightful satire about our not-so-favorite buffoon in the White House courting President Putin. It gave me a big laugh.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I hope you are back on your feet soon. I got a real kick out of this fun, delightful satire about our not-so-favorite buffoon in the White House courting President Putin. It gave me a big laugh.
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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It's just some flu thing that kind of lingers on. I'll be okay eventually. So delighted you enjoyed. Laughing is probably our best bet at the moment I'm afraid. LOL mikey
Comment from Gloria ....
There ya go, a triolet about the most powerful man in the world--Putin. My guess is that you have addressed the romantic dream about someone who doesn't know how you feel about him.
Am I right? HAHA. Good one and the metre ain't that rushin.
Super job, Mav. We all need a little more humour in our lives these days.
Ange
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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There ya go, a triolet about the most powerful man in the world--Putin. My guess is that you have addressed the romantic dream about someone who doesn't know how you feel about him.
Am I right? HAHA. Good one and the metre ain't that rushin.
Super job, Mav. We all need a little more humour in our lives these days.
Ange
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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It does get lonely in the desert. This would be more of a nightmare though. I can think of others I'd prefer topless on horseback....
Yep, I'm thinking we're smart to get as much laughter in as possible while we can. You're too kind as always, Ange. Thanks so much.
Mav