I Imagine White Tulips
A Cleave Poem63 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Your Cleave was very clever. Fun. You are very creative. I love that this can work as one poem, two poems or three poems. Well thought out and clearly written. Strong presentation. Beautiful work.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Your Cleave was very clever. Fun. You are very creative. I love that this can work as one poem, two poems or three poems. Well thought out and clearly written. Strong presentation. Beautiful work.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
This was really challenging to pen, but I enjoyed the challenge!
Thank you for your positive review!
diane
Comment from Alexander Vasa
What a lovely poem, and quite complex with a lot of wisdom and advice. I loved the tulips, one of my favourite flowers, so elegant. I also love the idea of inherent possibilities life has to offer. A very enjoyable and thought-provoking read. Thanks, Ana.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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What a lovely poem, and quite complex with a lot of wisdom and advice. I loved the tulips, one of my favourite flowers, so elegant. I also love the idea of inherent possibilities life has to offer. A very enjoyable and thought-provoking read. Thanks, Ana.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello Ana,
Thank you ever so much for your thoughtful and positive review!
diane
Comment from evilynne
Your poem is as lovely as white tulips and states its message of forgiveness well. It is well written; your explanation of the format is great. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Your poem is as lovely as white tulips and states its message of forgiveness well. It is well written; your explanation of the format is great. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello Evi!
I am so honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
Thank you ever so much!
diane
Comment from RGstar
Nicely done with your three-sided poem, author. Lovely to read. I sincerely appreciated the sentiments within, for it is close to thinking.
My best wishes.
Nicely presented.
Not easy as some may think.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Nicely done with your three-sided poem, author. Lovely to read. I sincerely appreciated the sentiments within, for it is close to thinking.
My best wishes.
Nicely presented.
Not easy as some may think.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello RGstar!
So very pleased you enjoyed my cleave poem.
I loved the challenge of penning this!
Thank you!
diane
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Hi, Mrs KT
Just to let you know that my new work will be released in about an hour's time. I am telling you this as you are one of my fans and it will not appear in your mailbox again as it was released early by the system, unfinished, and was deleted, and will not show released again in your mailbox, but you can now read it, if you are interested to do so, and it suits your ear... with curtesy, not for the sake of stars, just the option of knowing it is available, than not knowing. It will be also on the front page.
My best wishes. :) Have a beautiful Sunday
Comment from Sugarray77
This is AWESOME! This is also my first exposure to a Cleave poem and I am impressed. You did an excellent job crafting this and all the flowing connections that worked so well. Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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This is AWESOME! This is also my first exposure to a Cleave poem and I am impressed. You did an excellent job crafting this and all the flowing connections that worked so well. Great job!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hey Sugarray77,
So honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
Thank you so much!
diane
Comment from jlsavell
Ms. KT,
I have seen cleave poems before and they are daunting. Yours is absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A potent message which she be on every banner in every parade across the world.. well done..
jimi
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Ms. KT,
I have seen cleave poems before and they are daunting. Yours is absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A potent message which she be on every banner in every parade across the world.. well done..
jimi
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello jimi!
I am honored by your thoughtful and complimentary review! Thank you!
diane
Comment from His Grayness
Wow! What a lovely poetry lesson, and so beautifully delivered in all ways! Certainly, the coloration and packaging of this work is really very beautiful, and the GIFT of poetic EDUCATION is priceless, noting my sincere apologies for not having the very well delivered sixth star. Many sincere thanks to this excellent author for a truly lovely and rich work here! HIS GRAYNES; Vance
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Wow! What a lovely poetry lesson, and so beautifully delivered in all ways! Certainly, the coloration and packaging of this work is really very beautiful, and the GIFT of poetic EDUCATION is priceless, noting my sincere apologies for not having the very well delivered sixth star. Many sincere thanks to this excellent author for a truly lovely and rich work here! HIS GRAYNES; Vance
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello Vance!
I am so appreciative of your thoughtful and complimentary review!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi KT - this is very well written and such a good idea to tackle 'I Imagine' this way. Your poem reads very well in both cases and I'd give it a six if I had one. Well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hi KT - this is very well written and such a good idea to tackle 'I Imagine' this way. Your poem reads very well in both cases and I'd give it a six if I had one. Well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello Dorothy!
So very pleased you enjoyed my cleave poem!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from BermyBye50
KT,
Just when I thought I has seen every type of poetic form there is here on Fanstory, you surprise me with another one to learn to master. This is nothing less than a masterwork to my eyes and ears. It is brilliantly written and is woven together by a highly skilled poet who has truly earned the title 'All Time Best.'
Thank you for allowing me to join you on this wonderful journey exploring the creative world of poetry.
Cheers
Eugene
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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KT,
Just when I thought I has seen every type of poetic form there is here on Fanstory, you surprise me with another one to learn to master. This is nothing less than a masterwork to my eyes and ears. It is brilliantly written and is woven together by a highly skilled poet who has truly earned the title 'All Time Best.'
Thank you for allowing me to join you on this wonderful journey exploring the creative world of poetry.
Cheers
Eugene
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello Eugene!
I am so honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
I truly enjoyed penning this piece!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is a lovely poem you've penned, my friend. You did a fantastic job with this style of poetry, ~Kerry
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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This is a lovely poem you've penned, my friend. You did a fantastic job with this style of poetry, ~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Hello Kerry!
So pleased you enjoyed my cleave poem!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
diane
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Welcome:) Sorry for the late reply, I've been moving.