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I Didn't Know

A rock ballad for either a male or a female lead...

34 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I hear this tune in this love story gone wrong and the strength of these words follows through with the repeated lines to drive home the point, not all love affairs have happy endings, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Dolly -- so glad you enjoyed it! ;) ;) Take care out there, ma'am, and have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gloria ....
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I think is fantastic. I am really enjoying the songs that are coming out of this contest. And yours is romantic and sensuous in just the right amount.

Super job Yvette and best wishes to you in the voting booth.

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Gloria -- so glad you enjoyed it! ;) ;) Take care out there, ma'am, and have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Patty Palmer
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I liked your lyrics. I could almost picture it in my mind (so I've already got your t.v. video of your lyrics) It is bouncy and I like those kinds of rhymes.
God bless

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thanx so much for your review, Patricia -- so glad you enjoyed! :)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Good job, Yvette! Bravo. You're a songwriter! Wish I could hear the music you must have in your head. I love the lyrics, and I put my own music to it, though it's not very good. Dean knows how to upload audio. Do you?

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thank you, Beautiful Lady!! ;) ;) Songwriting's a 'secret love' of mine....just don't tell anybody! :) ;) LOL!
    And, no, I don't know how to upload those files...keep meaning to ask Dean, but I always forget when i might actually have the time. :) ;) Besides I can't write music anyway -- I'll just give the lyrics to Sir Elton and let him take it from there...LOL! ;) ;)
    Thanx, Phyllis, and have a wonderful week! ;)
Comment from Willie P. Smith
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Worthy of six stars, but I used them fast this time. So many great poems and entries. By the way, have you put this to music, you should. It is very understandable ad well written.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thanx so much for your wonderful comments here, Willie -- and, no, the one thing I don't do is write music... in fact, when it comes to 'reading' it, I simply follow the little black dots up and down with my voice! :) ;) LOL! You take care out there, sir! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
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Yvette,

Super duper job with this love poem/song. I had no idear you was so very very talented in so many areas. *smile* But we'uns just keep learning more and more about you. And I like it! Thanks and lots of good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019
    Thank you, my funny friend!! ;) ;) Songwriting's a 'secret love' of mine....just don't tell anybody! :) ;) LOL!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This is a fun and well constructed lyrical poem that makes me want to hit the dance floor. The relationship story falls into the three stages: hooked, set, and reeled in.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
    Thank you so very much for those lovely stars on this one, Sir Bill -- they really are a wonderful bright spot to my evening!! ;) ;) Glad you enjoyed my crazy 'rock side'.....although there may be more than one 'crazy' side (but don't tell anyone, okay? lol!). :) ;) Take care out there, sir, and get that Ned and Pons mystery solved! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Raul1
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This poem is very romantic. I like how you structured this poem. Well written! No grammatical errors. It is an interesting story. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
    Thanx for dropping by for the rock party, Raul!; ) ;)
reply by Raul1 on 24-Jun-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks how many things you did not know about her love, her win of your love, her responses and her answers to your questions; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
    Thanx for dropping by for the rock party this evening, DR ALCREATOR -- always good to hear from you, sir! ;) :)
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. They came across as being very personal. I enjoyed the read. Good luck with the contest. You have my vote for it.

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 Comment Written 24-Jun-2019

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2019
    Thanx for your review, Sandra -- much appreciated! ;)