The Ghost of Reader's Mill
A Constanza for Potlatch Poetry24 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Great use of this format. I can't keep up with all the possibilities I'm seeing. This one works well with your story about the Ghost of Old Reader's Mill. You do a great job conveying the spooky atmosphere and the possibility of ghosts being on the loose. Good explanation of how the ghost legend came to be. Super Halloween story. judi
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Great use of this format. I can't keep up with all the possibilities I'm seeing. This one works well with your story about the Ghost of Old Reader's Mill. You do a great job conveying the spooky atmosphere and the possibility of ghosts being on the loose. Good explanation of how the ghost legend came to be. Super Halloween story. judi
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you. I'm so glad you like it. I wasn't thinking about Halloween when I wrote it. I seem to be in a ghostly mood lately in poetry. lol
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You're welcome. This poem fits the Halloween atmosphere. judi
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is truly a scary story fit for a Halloween night. Most duels were horrific with only one man left standing. You painted a striking picture with your words.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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This is truly a scary story fit for a Halloween night. Most duels were horrific with only one man left standing. You painted a striking picture with your words.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you think so.
Comment from Pantygynt
Yes. This one works. I read the first lines through, and that gave me the gist of the story. After that the whole poem puts the icing on the cake. Well done.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Yes. This one works. I read the first lines through, and that gave me the gist of the story. After that the whole poem puts the icing on the cake. Well done.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you. Whew! I'm relieved. I'm about poetry-ed out. lol
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Any chance of catching you up with what you missed on Friday? Just one form to go. The ghazal.
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I'll try tomorrow or Monday.
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OK
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think you've done a good job with this poem for the Potlatch Poetry prompt.
Well written, well rhymed, and it tells a great story.
It reads smoothly while following the required format.
Well done.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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I think you've done a good job with this poem for the Potlatch Poetry prompt.
Well written, well rhymed, and it tells a great story.
It reads smoothly while following the required format.
Well done.
Sharon
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.