To My Secret Admirer #4
The letters continue.32 total reviews
Comment from Barbaraj1
What a sweet romantic story. I read the last one and am looking forward
to the next one. It's nice the father has love letters and the ring (I assume)
waiting to give it over to his son.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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What a sweet romantic story. I read the last one and am looking forward
to the next one. It's nice the father has love letters and the ring (I assume)
waiting to give it over to his son.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Barbara. I'm so glad you are enjoying my love letter stories. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from royowen
What a great heart of love you have Sally. I loved that quote from Katherine Hepburn, that is the truth, it's what we bring to the table of love, not the other way around. Beautifully written my sensitive friend, we write to bring perspective in one's life, and this is a marvellous offering, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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What a great heart of love you have Sally. I loved that quote from Katherine Hepburn, that is the truth, it's what we bring to the table of love, not the other way around. Beautifully written my sensitive friend, we write to bring perspective in one's life, and this is a marvellous offering, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you, Roy. I'm always glad to get feedback from my happily married men. It means a great deal.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
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Good job
Comment from Sankey
Loved this. Have I missed previous offerings or chapters in this story? Wonderful storytelling as is your norm. Just one little miss this time around. in (the) or (his)hospital bed
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Loved this. Have I missed previous offerings or chapters in this story? Wonderful storytelling as is your norm. Just one little miss this time around. in (the) or (his)hospital bed
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much for the generous six stars and outstanding review. Yes, Ive noticed you have missed quite a bit of my writing during your office/on FanStory transition. I will list them for you and you can look and see what you may have missed.
Love Letter on a Clipboard, 1,2,3,4 and To My Secret Admirer, 1,2,3,4, have run in tandem. They will end Christmas Eve Eve.
Next: you have missed my last, possibly last two, What The Blind Girl Saw, chapters 28 and 29. Chapter 30 will air this Sunday, 12/8. I have a horrible flu right now but that is the plan, God willing. I hope you are both well and again I appreciate you both so much! :) :)
Love in Christ,
Sally xoxo
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Sis thanks for the heads up. Will dig through and find these. I don't know why I missed them as I look everyday for my favourites of which you are definitely one.
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Aw, thank you. I am so blessed by you both. xoxo
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Thank you, again. This compliment went deep. :)
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Awe! Dad is so excited! It must be that his box of love letters inspired his son! How absolutely exquisite! I'm so happy that she at least knows now who her mystery fellow is! It truly alleviates the question "how could I be in love with someone I don't even know yet?" Hmmm...little velvet box, oh my what could be in there. :) xoxo
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Awe! Dad is so excited! It must be that his box of love letters inspired his son! How absolutely exquisite! I'm so happy that she at least knows now who her mystery fellow is! It truly alleviates the question "how could I be in love with someone I don't even know yet?" Hmmm...little velvet box, oh my what could be in there. :) xoxo
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and generous six stars. It is so appreciated, dear Diana. My husband and I are the inspiration for this story as we had a long courtship with many love letters exchanged. I made a 'Book of Love' two years ago for Jackson for our wedding anniversary. Truly, 'no one can lift the damn thing' as the song declared. It's bursting at the seams, literally. Our kids and grandkids love to read it.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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that is so lovely! how wonderful to have such memories preserved! I'm sure the kids get a big kick out of reading them! What a precious legacy to leave for them. I'll be waiting to see what's in that little velvet box! xoxoxo!
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Sally this is just a lovely continuation to your love story. A joy to read. They seem so right for each other.
I have one suggestion for you:
Captain John Lewis slept soundly in hospital bed this night, = Captain John Lewis slept soundly in his hospital bed that night,
I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Awe, Sally this is just a lovely continuation to your love story. A joy to read. They seem so right for each other.
I have one suggestion for you:
Captain John Lewis slept soundly in hospital bed this night, = Captain John Lewis slept soundly in his hospital bed that night,
I'm looking forward to what's next. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Dear Ulla, thank you for the superb review and shower of stars. It is so appreciated. I took your good critique and just repaired that area. Thank you! Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Teri7
Sally, This is a very good chapter you have penned with some really good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Sally, This is a very good chapter you have penned with some really good descriptive words and very nice imagery to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you, dear Teri. I'm glad you finally caught my love letter stories. His are, 'Love Letter on a Clipboard' and hers are 'To My Secret Admirer.' I hope you have time to access my portfolio and catch up. Start with Love Letter on Clipboard and then, To My Secret Admirer. They alternate back and forth. I'm so blessed by this and even more that you enjoyed it.
Sending you my best today as always with many thanks,
Sally xoxo
Comment from damommy
Oooooo, things are going just the right way. What a lovely story of two people finding each other. I'm guessing Captain Lewis is going to give Will a ring with great sentimental value.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Oooooo, things are going just the right way. What a lovely story of two people finding each other. I'm guessing Captain Lewis is going to give Will a ring with great sentimental value.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind comments, Yvonne. This chapter was a little bit telling of what's to come but I hope you'll stay tuned. It's syrupy delicious.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Henry King
As a new reader to your Secret Admirer letters Sally, I must say Number 4 is excellent. It may be important for some readers to know why Will's wife left him, but for some reason I'm not curious enough to ask why. That woman is gone. The break-up was in a past that I was not involved in any manner with. I like that you did not write exactly what Kristen accepted from Will. That unknown provides some suspense. What is important about Will's father's day? That is the page turner. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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As a new reader to your Secret Admirer letters Sally, I must say Number 4 is excellent. It may be important for some readers to know why Will's wife left him, but for some reason I'm not curious enough to ask why. That woman is gone. The break-up was in a past that I was not involved in any manner with. I like that you did not write exactly what Kristen accepted from Will. That unknown provides some suspense. What is important about Will's father's day? That is the page turner. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Well, there's a name I haven't seen in a while. It's good to see you Henry King. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. This is a back and for love letter story story. Start with 'Love Letter on a Clipboard and then, To My Secret Admirer. Each of these have four chapters so far and go back and forth. I hope you'll catch up in my portfolio. They end Christmas Eve Eve. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
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Sally, I've written a small biography about my Grandfather. That took a couple of months pure research, because we did not know his, his parents or my grandmother's families names. The only names we new were what was given to them at the entry port at Sweet Grass, Montana.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
How cool - he is following his Dad's example and it working for him now as beautifully as it had worked for his parents then. Nice twist to the tale! Now we have to wonder hat is in the second box - I do hope it is NOT a service revolver he will put to use now that his son is taken care of with a fine woman. I hope it is his wife's ring which he will give to his son to present to his lady love. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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How cool - he is following his Dad's example and it working for him now as beautifully as it had worked for his parents then. Nice twist to the tale! Now we have to wonder hat is in the second box - I do hope it is NOT a service revolver he will put to use now that his son is taken care of with a fine woman. I hope it is his wife's ring which he will give to his son to present to his lady love. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much for the marvelous review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated. I almost hate to see these end on Christmas Eve Eve.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from fm wright
Did you mean God keeps us in his care? Anyway love the way this story has progressed. It is a truly beautiful love story. It was interesting to find out that Will's father won his sweetheart in like manner. It is truly a story of hope.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Did you mean God keeps us in his care? Anyway love the way this story has progressed. It is a truly beautiful love story. It was interesting to find out that Will's father won his sweetheart in like manner. It is truly a story of hope.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and kindest compliments. Yes, that was a typo. I still have issues with my new keyboard, unfortunately. I appreciate you drawing my attention to that. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo