Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Simple and serene, I really enjoyed reading your words. I have read the poem several times and am left with a feeling of peace at the end of each reading.
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Simple and serene, I really enjoyed reading your words. I have read the poem several times and am left with a feeling of peace at the end of each reading.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
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A.Louise Robertson, I am sitting smiling that you are feeling such peace at the culmination of each reading, what more could any poet ask for...I am so thankful for your validation!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Your poem suggests a silence except for the rushing current as you wade against it. Dragging you into a dream where your senses are aroused, pulse quicker, and face flushed. And then you awake!
I love the picture you chose to go with your poem.
Patty
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Your poem suggests a silence except for the rushing current as you wade against it. Dragging you into a dream where your senses are aroused, pulse quicker, and face flushed. And then you awake!
I love the picture you chose to go with your poem.
Patty
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
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Patty, thank you for your review and comments.
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Drew Delaney
Wow! You have used the 20 word entry to read almost like a special form. Maybe it is! Dreams can often end up in poetry or even other short works. You have captured the nighttime with this amazing poem. Nice work.
Drew
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Wow! You have used the 20 word entry to read almost like a special form. Maybe it is! Dreams can often end up in poetry or even other short works. You have captured the nighttime with this amazing poem. Nice work.
Drew
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
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Drew, thank you for the review and validation on this work.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry dear jlr! The imagery is exquisite! It is rather ethereal and a beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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This is a fine piece of poetry dear jlr! The imagery is exquisite! It is rather ethereal and a beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2020
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Smiling with a glad heart, hugs back!
Comment from Lu Saluna
You did a fantastic job rhyming your twenty word poem. For me, it tells a story of one asleep having a bad dream and then waking up from it.
Best of luck to you in the contest
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You did a fantastic job rhyming your twenty word poem. For me, it tells a story of one asleep having a bad dream and then waking up from it.
Best of luck to you in the contest
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
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Lu, thank you our dreams are the inner world of things that need to be put to paper to see ourselves more deeply.
Comment from Dancemom
This is a very good entry for the 20 word poetry contest. Your word count is correct. You have vividly described a dream with a nice set of rhymes. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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This is a very good entry for the 20 word poetry contest. Your word count is correct. You have vividly described a dream with a nice set of rhymes. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
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Heather, thank you. I believe our dreams are the inner world of things that need to be put to paper to see ourselves more deeply.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your rhyming 20 word poem. It showed a lot of drama until I realized all that ethereal but tangible feeling was all due to a dream. Best wishes in the contest!
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Great job with your rhyming 20 word poem. It showed a lot of drama until I realized all that ethereal but tangible feeling was all due to a dream. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
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lyenocka, thank you. I believe our dreams are the inner world of things that need to be put to paper to see ourselves more deeply.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Some of my best ideas come from dreams. Or from wading in streams or walking in the woods. Seems anytime my mind isn't racing with other things is a good time for ideas. Good luck in the contest.
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Some of my best ideas come from dreams. Or from wading in streams or walking in the woods. Seems anytime my mind isn't racing with other things is a good time for ideas. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
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Cindy, thank you. I believe our dreams are the inner world of things that need to be put to paper to see ourselves more deeply.
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful poem, I love the flow and rhyme in this work (very clever), your choice of words is excellent, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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What a beautiful poem, I love the flow and rhyme in this work (very clever), your choice of words is excellent, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
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kahpot, thank you. I believe our dreams are the inner world of things that need to be put to paper to see ourselves more deeply.
Comment from kleck140
Brief and to the point in your poetry.
but is states a lot to stimulate my thinking.
You should win the contest. Thanks for sharing.
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Brief and to the point in your poetry.
but is states a lot to stimulate my thinking.
You should win the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2020
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kleck, thank you. I believe our dreams are the inner world of things that need to be put to paper to see ourselves more deeply.
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You are welcome!