Thirsty
A flower speaks up.29 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
In only the fifty words allowed, you have told a moving, charming little story about the "runt of the litter"-so to speak. Maybe narrator flower will get a big gulp tomorrow. (Check spelling of that word above.)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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In only the fifty words allowed, you have told a moving, charming little story about the "runt of the litter"-so to speak. Maybe narrator flower will get a big gulp tomorrow. (Check spelling of that word above.)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review of my dribble flash fiction, dear Jan. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from BethShelby
It doesn't take a lot of moisture to make them lift their heads but it doesn't take much heat and dryness to make them droop. I have a Peace Lily that does that to me ever so often. It almost feels like it is pleading for drink. Nice dribble fiction.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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It doesn't take a lot of moisture to make them lift their heads but it doesn't take much heat and dryness to make them droop. I have a Peace Lily that does that to me ever so often. It almost feels like it is pleading for drink. Nice dribble fiction.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I appreciate it I appreciate your excellent review and kind comments, too.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Beth. Sally xo
Comment from royowen
I like the way you've personified the flower Sally, a very clever ekphrastic look at a very sad looking flower, but it looks like it won't need much to get it going. A great entry in this dribble fiction contest Sally, good look, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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I like the way you've personified the flower Sally, a very clever ekphrastic look at a very sad looking flower, but it looks like it won't need much to get it going. A great entry in this dribble fiction contest Sally, good look, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments, dear Roy. I'm so glad you enjoyed my dribble flash fiction. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
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My pleasure Sally,
Comment from DeboraDyess
Oh, poor little flower! :Hope mine ren't beginning to look like htat!
I don't see nay issues in the writing or technical.
Good luck in the contest, Sally!
Hope your week is wonderful. Stay well,
Deb
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Oh, poor little flower! :Hope mine ren't beginning to look like htat!
I don't see nay issues in the writing or technical.
Good luck in the contest, Sally!
Hope your week is wonderful. Stay well,
Deb
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review.
Sal
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This like our plants in Texas on most years. So far this year, we've had plenty of rain, but will it last. The weather is a mystery this year. Thank you for sharing your contest entry with us and I wish you luck.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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This like our plants in Texas on most years. So far this year, we've had plenty of rain, but will it last. The weather is a mystery this year. Thank you for sharing your contest entry with us and I wish you luck.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kindest compliments. I always appreciate your kind reviews. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Sally. This is a fun little story about the flower that can't get enough water. It's tough for the little flowers when the big flowers take all the rain.
Good luck in the contest.
Pal Z :-))
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Hey Sally. This is a fun little story about the flower that can't get enough water. It's tough for the little flowers when the big flowers take all the rain.
Good luck in the contest.
Pal Z :-))
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind attention to my work, dear Z. I appreciate you so much. Sending you my best today as always, Sally :))
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You're welcome Sal.
Pal Z. :-)))
Comment from damommy
Poor little flower. All those big ones are selfish and won't share the water. You've certainly made me feel sorry for her/him. Cute idea for a Dribble Flash Fiction. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Poor little flower. All those big ones are selfish and won't share the water. You've certainly made me feel sorry for her/him. Cute idea for a Dribble Flash Fiction. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments. I really appreciate you stopping by for my dribble flash contest entry. Sending my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Poor little flower - just wanting her share of the rain. I like your personification of the flower and children reading could relate very well to her situation. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Poor little flower - just wanting her share of the rain. I like your personification of the flower and children reading could relate very well to her situation. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for your kind review. As always , I so appreciate you. Sending you my best today, as well.
Sal xoxo
Comment from Drew Delaney
Yes, it is one day at a time! I love the peony here and it is touching. Your poem is beautifully written. I wondered if the flower was a metaphor for someone! Just wondering!
Drew xx
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Yes, it is one day at a time! I love the peony here and it is touching. Your poem is beautifully written. I wondered if the flower was a metaphor for someone! Just wondering!
Drew xx
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments. This actually is a Lotus, I think. And I just thought it was so pretty because it's my favorite shade of pink. I fashioned the story from just looking at the picture. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo