Alphabetic Ruminations
A modern-day ABC poetic twist on the Abecedarian...64 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
This is a very creative and unusual ABC poem. Artistically it is written in a unique fashion but also includes a strong contemporary message.
Since I like different ways of doing things, I like this particular post very much because it is quite different.
Nice going, and good luck in the contest.
DA Z
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Hello Yvette.
This is a very creative and unusual ABC poem. Artistically it is written in a unique fashion but also includes a strong contemporary message.
Since I like different ways of doing things, I like this particular post very much because it is quite different.
Nice going, and good luck in the contest.
DA Z
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Z! Not only for your comments but for those awesome stars and what they have to say as well (and, yes, I strive for 'different' - lol!)! :) ;) This was my first poem in a while that I actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... just so much going on these days, ya know?! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share, sir! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a terrific entry for the ABC poetry contest. You have written a whole alphabet of them!and what's more it actually makes a coherent story. Good luck, I hope it does well.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This is a terrific entry for the ABC poetry contest. You have written a whole alphabet of them!and what's more it actually makes a coherent story. Good luck, I hope it does well.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Katherine! Not only for your comments but for those awesome stars and what they have to say as well! :) ;) This was my first poem in a while that I actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... just so much going on these days, ya know?! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows this world needs so much MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
I've heard lots of things written, not only the horror and the grief, the the relatives, family, friends that will never see their loved ones again. But also the bravery and commitment of the many heroes, and I'm sure angels walked among them. I also heard the towers were a symbol of Nimrod's Tower of Babel, representing the power of wealth, beautifully written, a magnificent tribute to thst fate-filled day, well done Yvette, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I've heard lots of things written, not only the horror and the grief, the the relatives, family, friends that will never see their loved ones again. But also the bravery and commitment of the many heroes, and I'm sure angels walked among them. I also heard the towers were a symbol of Nimrod's Tower of Babel, representing the power of wealth, beautifully written, a magnificent tribute to thst fate-filled day, well done Yvette, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Roy, for your review on this one, sir!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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Well done Yvette
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Ms. Roger,
I pray you are doing well. This is such an awesome creative Alphabetic Ruminations & ABC poem. Your rhyming in your poem is greatly done. Yes, you did go all out in presenting this A - Z poem. Also, I love your imagery of the red, white and blue photo. This was such an enjoyable read of each of your alphabets. Great job. Happy future writing:-)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Hello Ms. Roger,
I pray you are doing well. This is such an awesome creative Alphabetic Ruminations & ABC poem. Your rhyming in your poem is greatly done. Yes, you did go all out in presenting this A - Z poem. Also, I love your imagery of the red, white and blue photo. This was such an enjoyable read of each of your alphabets. Great job. Happy future writing:-)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Joyce! Not only for your comments but for those awesome stars and what they have to say as well! :) ;) This was my first poem in a while that I actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... just so much going on these days, ya know?! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows this world needs so much MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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You are welcome. It was a great day. It's our Anniversary (11 years) today and the full week was wonderful also. Take care and stay safe.
Comment from w.j.debi
You certainly put a lot of thought into this poem, including rhyme, meter and a though provoking message. I am impressed with your use of the alphabet and content of the poem.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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You certainly put a lot of thought into this poem, including rhyme, meter and a though provoking message. I am impressed with your use of the alphabet and content of the poem.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, W.J., for your review on this one, my lady!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
First-good luck in the contest, Yvette. This was nicely done and well presented. It spoke of the truth of the nation and the present challenges. It was very much appreciated and well read.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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First-good luck in the contest, Yvette. This was nicely done and well presented. It spoke of the truth of the nation and the present challenges. It was very much appreciated and well read.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Alie, for your review on this one, my lady!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome, Yvette, always smiling here, you as well take care.
Comment from estory
Hats off for the effort to fit into that alphabet scheme. That took some work and you pulled it off with some rhythm and some great echoing effects. We feel the tension in the air too as the nation gets shaken by all these forces and the uncertainty of the election hangs in the air. Hard to hold onto anything in this quaking...estory
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Hats off for the effort to fit into that alphabet scheme. That took some work and you pulled it off with some rhythm and some great echoing effects. We feel the tension in the air too as the nation gets shaken by all these forces and the uncertainty of the election hangs in the air. Hard to hold onto anything in this quaking...estory
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, E, for your review on this one!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
Fantastic entry! I particularly enjoyed the part about revolution's not so far away and watershed moment for red, white and blue. Very well packed and good luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Fantastic entry! I particularly enjoyed the part about revolution's not so far away and watershed moment for red, white and blue. Very well packed and good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, I-S, for dropping by for a review on this one!! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Be sure to stop in again sometime and take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for announcing your poem with the striking "America" painting. I am so impressed that you presented the entire alphabet in this ABC Poem. Your use of rhymes and the refrain are a special touch. Your "going all out" for the contest is much appreciated and makes this poem a clear winner- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for announcing your poem with the striking "America" painting. I am so impressed that you presented the entire alphabet in this ABC Poem. Your use of rhymes and the refrain are a special touch. Your "going all out" for the contest is much appreciated and makes this poem a clear winner- Joan
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Wow, Joan!! ;) :) Thanx so much not only for your comments but for those awesome stars and what they have to say as well! :) ;) This was my first poem in a while that I actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... just so much going on, ya know?! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows this world needs so much MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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Thank you for sharing you good wishes and your very positive opportunity to spend more time with your poetry and your muses. Smiles- Joan
Comment from juliaSjames
Yvette you're so clever and creative! I love the patter of your philosophic entry with it's searching refrain.
In addition the optics are terrific.
Very well done, my friend.
Good luck in the contest.
Stay safe and enjoy your weekend.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Yvette you're so clever and creative! I love the patter of your philosophic entry with it's searching refrain.
In addition the optics are terrific.
Very well done, my friend.
Good luck in the contest.
Stay safe and enjoy your weekend.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Julia, for your review on this one, my lady!! ;) This was my first one in a while that I've actually had the time to sit and think and let the muses loose (LOL!)... glad you enjoyed! ;) Hope this finds you with a smile for the day and happiness to share: goodness knows we need MORE of both! :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
P.S. Really good to see your smiling face with those grandkids again! ;)