Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from amada
This is a very nicely done faith poem. I heard you loud and clear about how your thoughts came to your mind; sometimes not the thoughts we want...Humanity. I wish you well in this faith contest.
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This is a very nicely done faith poem. I heard you loud and clear about how your thoughts came to your mind; sometimes not the thoughts we want...Humanity. I wish you well in this faith contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Amada, thank you, 2021 is a long, long time for this contest.
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Your poem is well-done.There is a lot of honesty and strength in your words. The dove picture is a five accompaniment. It sounds from the poem that you received what you were asking for.The humility of your poem particularly speaks.
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Your poem is well-done.There is a lot of honesty and strength in your words. The dove picture is a five accompaniment. It sounds from the poem that you received what you were asking for.The humility of your poem particularly speaks.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Humbled by receiving Grace always tests ones own humility.
Comment from sammielwf
JLR,
Would that every human would hear that still small voice inside them and heed its call. Mother, Father, God- Spirit- always knows our hearts and our destiny and our path. Spirit is always willing to shine a light on what we need to see and open our ears to what we need to hear.
The most wonderous thing is that: Mother, Father, God, Spirit is the very epitome of patience and will actually wait within us and in us forever!
I really loved the gentle imagery that your words created- stanza by stanza, one upon the next.
Well done and deserving of the angels that were sent to the creator of this poem.
Sammielwf
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JLR,
Would that every human would hear that still small voice inside them and heed its call. Mother, Father, God- Spirit- always knows our hearts and our destiny and our path. Spirit is always willing to shine a light on what we need to see and open our ears to what we need to hear.
The most wonderous thing is that: Mother, Father, God, Spirit is the very epitome of patience and will actually wait within us and in us forever!
I really loved the gentle imagery that your words created- stanza by stanza, one upon the next.
Well done and deserving of the angels that were sent to the creator of this poem.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Sammie, I am humbled by your six-star validation for Father-Mother-God- Spirit- brings Grace into my whole Beingness.
Comment from Sally Law
I loved reading of your faith, although you have high thoughts way beyond my own. I'm not sure my thoughts are as eloquent, but my faith is pure. Each one has a gold and precious faith of their own hidden away inside.
I love to seeing your offering for the contest and a glimpse of your gold.
Sal :))
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I loved reading of your faith, although you have high thoughts way beyond my own. I'm not sure my thoughts are as eloquent, but my faith is pure. Each one has a gold and precious faith of their own hidden away inside.
I love to seeing your offering for the contest and a glimpse of your gold.
Sal :))
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Sal, I smile back, knowing full well that you are the embodiment of all that God?s Chosen People represent in your wholeness.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Master's Messenger
by JLR
Hello, JLR,
Excellent entry for the My Faith contest. You expressed your thoughts about your faith in a very poetic explicit way and was enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
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The Master's Messenger
by JLR
Hello, JLR,
Excellent entry for the My Faith contest. You expressed your thoughts about your faith in a very poetic explicit way and was enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Gyps Blue Rose, thank you much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lovely, quietly emotional spiritual poem has moved me. Yes, when we are able to dismiss the worldly thoughts swirling in our heads and truly seek Him, we find Him. I too have wondered why I'm still here! He's still working on me.
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This lovely, quietly emotional spiritual poem has moved me. Yes, when we are able to dismiss the worldly thoughts swirling in our heads and truly seek Him, we find Him. I too have wondered why I'm still here! He's still working on me.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Janice, I am smiling back in our joint wonderment and Joy taking place in our lives.
Comment from Cindy Decker
An awesome tribute to God. He wants to be close to us every day. This poem reminds me of the days that have gone by that I might not have sought his love. I feel blessed, too, that God has kept me alive for so long. I owe Him 9 lives and my spiritual one as well. This is what I get when I read your beautiful poem. I like the pretty refrain .
Good luck in the contest, JLR.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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An awesome tribute to God. He wants to be close to us every day. This poem reminds me of the days that have gone by that I might not have sought his love. I feel blessed, too, that God has kept me alive for so long. I owe Him 9 lives and my spiritual one as well. This is what I get when I read your beautiful poem. I like the pretty refrain .
Good luck in the contest, JLR.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Cindy, thank you! I, like you, have been provided many bodily and spiritual lives and I am so grateful in the journey!
Comment from TommyWrites
This is beautiful JLR.
Peoples individual faith is...beautiful. Everyone has a different relationship with God. It's truly beautiful and almost intimate to read poems and articles about peoples faith.
This is a very deep and moving poem. You've done an excellent job on it.
Thank you for sharing and good luck!
TommyWrites~
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This is beautiful JLR.
Peoples individual faith is...beautiful. Everyone has a different relationship with God. It's truly beautiful and almost intimate to read poems and articles about peoples faith.
This is a very deep and moving poem. You've done an excellent job on it.
Thank you for sharing and good luck!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Tommywrites, thank you! Yes it is true that we each have our own unique connection to the Master.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful and spiritual poem and we are lucky survive on this earth a long time as there are many obstacles in our way, and finding peace it the only way to a contented life. Your beliefs here are strong, love Dolly x
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A faithful and spiritual poem and we are lucky survive on this earth a long time as there are many obstacles in our way, and finding peace it the only way to a contented life. Your beliefs here are strong, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Dolly, Yes it is true that we each have our own unique connection to the Master. I trust you are staying well!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are spiritual, have a message and are creative. As
I read this poem I thought about my favorite Bible Quote "Be Still and
Know that I am God". Thank you for such a lovely poem.
Have a great day!
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The author's words are spiritual, have a message and are creative. As
I read this poem I thought about my favorite Bible Quote "Be Still and
Know that I am God". Thank you for such a lovely poem.
Have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Harmony, thank you from the bottom of my heart!