Real Men
When the west was young.31 total reviews
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Howdy partner. Sorry couldn't help myself. :)
Your brilliantly penned poem shares with the reader the clear images you had in your head when you began writing this poem. The images you paint are so clear and vivid throughout. The rhyming was excellent and unforced.
Some were cowboys, some wanted by the law.
They were real men, one and all.
How Indians and Outlaws followed the herd
And either would kill you with nary a word
My favourite stanza.
Take care, Pete
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
  |
Howdy partner. Sorry couldn't help myself. :)
Your brilliantly penned poem shares with the reader the clear images you had in your head when you began writing this poem. The images you paint are so clear and vivid throughout. The rhyming was excellent and unforced.
Some were cowboys, some wanted by the law.
They were real men, one and all.
How Indians and Outlaws followed the herd
And either would kill you with nary a word
My favourite stanza.
Take care, Pete
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
-
thank you, Pete, for your very kind review and six stars.