Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I seem to have missed quite a bit. As an 'in medias res' short story this is interesting, but I still find Ali and Cord rather distanced and formal with each other for a couple who are planning their wedding. kay

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

They aren't planning their wedding day. It was a discussion Cord overheard as the ladies were describing their imaginary wedding. Thank you for the kind review. Cord hasn't proposed.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I got so confused with the homecoming and prom conversation. I was positive you couldn't have made a mistake that I was thinking. My age got the best of me.

Good chapter. John

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

LOL If they dated for homecoming, then they did date. Pat said they never dated. He rated her at Prom. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Your story will soon take us to a wedding. We'll have to wait and see when it happens between Ali and Cord. The bad fellow, in this story, sure has covered much evidence up before Ali, the lawyer, came upon the scene.

I am sure glad that they found the manuscript for your story, Tattered Hearts." What a scare.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

Thank you for the review and about Two Tattered Hearts. I couldn't believe the story was missing.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That wasn't nice of Amy's parents, although I think it's more her father than her mother, she seems to be one of those mothers who do as they are told. After what she went through, you'd think her parents would have been there for her. Now we are getting closer to the trial, and also we are getting close to having a wedding!!!! I enjoyed this part, well done, Barbara. One little nit below. :) Sandra xxx

"(N)Either would I.

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

I made the correction, but I'm not sure Jim would know neither is a word. LOL Earlier we learned that Amy's mom wanted to help but wouldn't overrule her husband. Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 25-Jan-2023

Oh yes, I remember now. I'm still in a fog! Lol xxx

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

I'm still praying for you.

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 25-Jan-2023

Bless you, thank you so much. I'll get there. I'm already feeling a lot better than I was even when I left hospital. Prayers do work. Love you lots, my friend. xx

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 25-Jan-2023

Bless you, thank you so much. I'll get there. I'm already feeling a lot better than I was even when I left hospital. Prayers do work. Love you lots, my friend. xx

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story and the love story along nicely. I am a little confused if Cord went to the prom. First, he names his prom date and then he was at a rodeo.

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

He named his date for Homecoming, he went to a rodeo instead of Prom. Thank you for the kind review.

reply by eliz100 on 25-Jan-2023

Thank you.