Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am glad that Emma's little dog is getting better and Seth seems very caring. This is a fine chapter with no major disruptions and the relationship seems to be much closer now, a fine write Barbara, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

I'm glad Molly is back home with Emma. I love it that Ace is so protective of the little fur ball. At least they had a nice picnic, and there was nobody coming to put the dampers on it. But, I suppose it can't all be good, not when you have the stalker, the ex, and Peggy ready to burst the bubble. Well done, Barbara. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I enjoyed this chapter. Seth opened and told what had gone on in his life, and Emma got her dog back, although she still seems awfully fragile. Seth and Emma are getting closer with every chapter. This is excellent novel.

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

He used his thumb to caress her hand. Well, I guess the reader can be thankful for that tiny move. Some form of progression/ affection from a single adult male. I think the length isn't an issue, thing read quickly to me. I do have the normal concerns about is this an actual romance or just friendship but it's your show. Good luck on the next installment.

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 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023

I already know you feel romance must contain a romp in bed, but I don't feel the same way. It seems many of my fan's don't either, and not just on FanStory, but people who actually purchase my novels. There is a market out there for both our styles. Thank you for the kind review.

reply by lancellot on 29-Oct-2023

No. I don't mean a romp in the bed. I mean, passion, longing, love, desire, those bees that go crazy in your stomach. Your heart racing when you get lost in his/her eyes. Stumbling over your own tongue, because your brain will not focus. A sudden flare of jealousy when someone catches their attention. Dreaming about them. Nervousness, going back and forth wondering if you should take a chance or not. Face flush, hands sweaty, body parts tingling and growing on their own.

Barbara, I mean the stuff that makes Romance addictive.

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Lengthy this time but it is still a good story. I love the way you bring thing into the open while keeping things clean. Good one, Barb. Enjoying the story so far.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023

Thank you for the kind review.