Guided by Faith
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Comment from Jacob1395
That is a cliffhanger to leave us on Barbara, and now I have to know what Seth needs to tell Emma. You did a great job again with the dialogue and I love how it brings your character's to life. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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That is a cliffhanger to leave us on Barbara, and now I have to know what Seth needs to tell Emma. You did a great job again with the dialogue and I love how it brings your character's to life. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, another great chapter for your storr yh, Seth and Emma are still dancing around each othe so to speak. You really left us on a cliffhanger here.
Merry Christmas to you as well. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Hi Barbara, another great chapter for your storr yh, Seth and Emma are still dancing around each othe so to speak. You really left us on a cliffhanger here.
Merry Christmas to you as well. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from damommy
How could you leave me hanging like that. There must be an important, or scary, reason Seth's telling this with hesitation. Also, Emma questions every move Seth makes, analyzing things to death. I hope it doesn't spoil things between them.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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How could you leave me hanging like that. There must be an important, or scary, reason Seth's telling this with hesitation. Also, Emma questions every move Seth makes, analyzing things to death. I hope it doesn't spoil things between them.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Seth is hesitating because he lied. If you think back to that day, you'll know what it is. Thank you for the kind review. Emma said it today, she's never been in a relationship before. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh, I see. Please understand I meant no criticism in any way. Just voicing thoughts.
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I didn't mean that you meant any criticism. I'm so sorry if it sounded as if I did. That was not my intent. I guess I was in too much of a hurry when I answered your review. I am so sorry. Please accept my apology.
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No need to apologize, my friend. I thought my review sounded harsh, not your replay at all.
Comment from royowen
Ah the perfect ending to the episode, I wonder what he will say. All your female characters are old fashioned, and the males are respectful and idealistic, and as it turns out well suited, but surrounded by contrasting characters, I like it, sort of Hallmarkish, well done Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : some girls explained (what) their dates expected. 2: I like(d) the way it is
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Ah the perfect ending to the episode, I wonder what he will say. All your female characters are old fashioned, and the males are respectful and idealistic, and as it turns out well suited, but surrounded by contrasting characters, I like it, sort of Hallmarkish, well done Barbara, blessings Roy
Typo : some girls explained (what) their dates expected. 2: I like(d) the way it is
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the catches. I've made the corrections. I appreciate the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from BethShelby
I would have been fine with more words. When a story is fun to read like yours are I don't notice the number of words. I guess we have to wait a week to know what Seth has to tell her.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I would have been fine with more words. When a story is fun to read like yours are I don't notice the number of words. I guess we have to wait a week to know what Seth has to tell her.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Sure, do have to wait, but if you think about it, you already know. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
It is NOT that easy to get a teaching job. This job falls into Emma's lap all too easily. Please show her going through the usual process. At least have her at the school for the interview. The job is a good fit for her, but she, realistically, should not just glide in. I hope things work out for Seth and Emma despite the age difference. She'll surely mature once she's started this job. Seth seems to like to be the one in control, so he will appreciate Emma. You've done a great job with all the details about what Emma's endured, etc. Don't worry about the length of your chapters. They're engaging, so people will keep reading. judi
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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It is NOT that easy to get a teaching job. This job falls into Emma's lap all too easily. Please show her going through the usual process. At least have her at the school for the interview. The job is a good fit for her, but she, realistically, should not just glide in. I hope things work out for Seth and Emma despite the age difference. She'll surely mature once she's started this job. Seth seems to like to be the one in control, so he will appreciate Emma. You've done a great job with all the details about what Emma's endured, etc. Don't worry about the length of your chapters. They're engaging, so people will keep reading. judi
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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In small towns it does happen that easy, unless you're not originally from that town, then it is harder. They knew Emma, she grew up there, and went to school there. Her family is in good standing in the town, it simply falls into her lap. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. I'm suspicious of things that just fall into your lap. I think even in a small town there would be some formality of interview, okay from school board members, maybe interview with department chairs, etc. judi
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Even here in Texas I was only interviewed the assistant principal. The principal was on vacation.
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I never had it so easy. Sometimes applicants are interviewed before a whole panel. Sometimes they're require to present a sample lesson. I suppose you presented your credentials, made an application, etc.
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I never had it so easy. Sometimes applicants are interviewed before a whole panel. Sometimes they're require to present a sample lesson. I suppose you presented your credentials, made an application, etc.
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Yours must have been an unusual situation. Sometimes there's a whole panel to interview the prospective teacher. Sometimes it's required that he or she present a sample lesson. I suppose you had made an application, presented your credentials, etc. You might have some reference to her having made an application to teach at that school. judi
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They already had my credentials, my Texas state test results, references, and all. My son, Steven, had an interview by Sype and was hired on the spot. It does happen, and often.
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Thanks for your insights. I certainly never had it that easy. judi
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely chapter continuing to explore this relationship and find the perfect balance. Due to the age difference, it's been a bit of a cha cha dance with one partner stepping carefully forward and the other back as they try to reconcile their feelings for one another. You've ended on a cliff-hanger, Barbara and the fact that Seth is swallowing, suggests that the news isn't good. I look forward to reading more. No errors noted and, for me, the length is perfect. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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A lovely chapter continuing to explore this relationship and find the perfect balance. Due to the age difference, it's been a bit of a cha cha dance with one partner stepping carefully forward and the other back as they try to reconcile their feelings for one another. You've ended on a cliff-hanger, Barbara and the fact that Seth is swallowing, suggests that the news isn't good. I look forward to reading more. No errors noted and, for me, the length is perfect. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. Seth lied to Emma about something, hmmm?
Comment from jmdg1954
Ugh, now I have to wait a week to find out what's going on about what Seth's about to confess.
I think this chapter progressed with her accepting a teaching position and going on a semi-date with Seth.
I agree with your notes on dates... Its not always about sex, like it seems to be in 2023... There are proper ways to treat each other and that's how we raised our three children.
I appreciate you breaking THE chapters down, but just so you know, I'd read the 4,000 word post as well.
Enjoy your Sunday.
John
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Ugh, now I have to wait a week to find out what's going on about what Seth's about to confess.
I think this chapter progressed with her accepting a teaching position and going on a semi-date with Seth.
I agree with your notes on dates... Its not always about sex, like it seems to be in 2023... There are proper ways to treat each other and that's how we raised our three children.
I appreciate you breaking THE chapters down, but just so you know, I'd read the 4,000 word post as well.
Enjoy your Sunday.
John
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. If you think about it, you already know what happened that Seth needs to share.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, a well written slice of lifestyle chapter. Nothing new seems to be happening, maybe a little backtracking on the dating thing, and pointing out things mentioned in the reviews about how Emma is portrayed. We are told she is wonderful and smart but shown something else. Even here you are 'shinning a light on it'. Why now?
I do wonder what the remaining plot of the story is? It seems the conclusion or resolution has passed.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Hmm, a well written slice of lifestyle chapter. Nothing new seems to be happening, maybe a little backtracking on the dating thing, and pointing out things mentioned in the reviews about how Emma is portrayed. We are told she is wonderful and smart but shown something else. Even here you are 'shinning a light on it'. Why now?
I do wonder what the remaining plot of the story is? It seems the conclusion or resolution has passed.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I think you want to rush the story. There is still a lot to happen. Thank you for the kind review.
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I don't mean to rush you. I mean, a story is a journey. From here to there. A beginning, conflict and finally a resolution. At this point, there is no 'story' conflict anymore. The obstacles and villain have been delt with. The stalker and Peggy (to smaller extent) are gone. Yes, life goes on, and in any life 'things' pop up. But, if that is the case, then such a story, never ends.
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Story to disappoint you, but there is still conflict. I don't know what happened to Peggy, yet. All I know is she was arrested, who knows what happened from there. Besides in a romance there needs to be the ending of a marriage or at least the promise of one and that hasn't happened, yet. Neither Seth nor Emma have said a word about love, just that they're dating. Hmmm, interesting. I think you're rushing the ending.
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A good writer knows actions speak louder than words. And their actions have been very clear to the readers. But, it's your story. Continue as you see best.
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I will continue as I know is best.
Comment from nomi338
I love it. One of the greatest date I have ever had was followed up by my date joining me at church the very next day where I sang a solo that set the church aglow with spirit and elevated me in her eyes.
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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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I love it. One of the greatest date I have ever had was followed up by my date joining me at church the very next day where I sang a solo that set the church aglow with spirit and elevated me in her eyes.
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Comment Written 17-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
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Thank you for sharing that story with me. I appreciate the kind review.