Willing Hearts
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Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written.
They believe the girls are run aways - (runaways)
Sami probably wished she could have kept the money. (smiley face here)
Seems like a greta time to ask the girls questions, right after 'proving' herself.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Well written.
They believe the girls are run aways - (runaways)
Sami probably wished she could have kept the money. (smiley face here)
Seems like a greta time to ask the girls questions, right after 'proving' herself.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Dang it, I did it again. LOL I will make that correction. For some reason, I can't get into my brain. I appreciate the help.
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We all do it. Some of my dumbbell blunders are downright embarrassin'.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I know there could be a romance developing here but I think Noah is fast getting in danger of losing his job! This is such a different story to Seth and Emma and I'm enjoying the fast moving pace and sexy excitement of it so far. It's a clever idea to get a woman involved in this way but she's obviously not really cut out for the job and is going to land herself in hot water soon, I think. An excellent chapter, Barbara, for no edits noticed. Debbie
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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I know there could be a romance developing here but I think Noah is fast getting in danger of losing his job! This is such a different story to Seth and Emma and I'm enjoying the fast moving pace and sexy excitement of it so far. It's a clever idea to get a woman involved in this way but she's obviously not really cut out for the job and is going to land herself in hot water soon, I think. An excellent chapter, Barbara, for no edits noticed. Debbie
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Yes, Sami does get herself into deep trouble. LOL Noah is secure in his job. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think this is one of your very best novels, Barbara, you've written this so realistically. I think Sami is really putting herself in danger, and she is really lucky that Noah happens to be investigating that same thing, the missing girls. That Big T needs taking down a peg or two and I'm sure that it will happen one day. Well done!! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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I think this is one of your very best novels, Barbara, you've written this so realistically. I think Sami is really putting herself in danger, and she is really lucky that Noah happens to be investigating that same thing, the missing girls. That Big T needs taking down a peg or two and I'm sure that it will happen one day. Well done!! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Big T is a pain but ends up much later helping Noah take down the bad guys. LOL Interesting how that comes about. Thank you, again for the encouragement.
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Well that's going to be a twist in the tail! This is a fabulous story, and I'm really enjoying it. xxx
Comment from Baltimore Born
This was a well-written story. All of the characters are well defined. Sami is an interesting character. I like the drama in this story. I can see the possible romance developing between Sami and Noah. Overall, a very well written story
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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This was a well-written story. All of the characters are well defined. Sami is an interesting character. I like the drama in this story. I can see the possible romance developing between Sami and Noah. Overall, a very well written story
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you for this kind review. You're right about Sami and Noah. I can promise problems. LOL
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Begin Again
Great job, Barbara.... How many stories or documentaries did you research for the realistic situation unfolding on the street. Sami's headstrong and not really in touch with how it works outthere with the working girls. So glad that the crew are keeping a close eye on her, but one slip up and things could go real bad.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Great job, Barbara.... How many stories or documentaries did you research for the realistic situation unfolding on the street. Sami's headstrong and not really in touch with how it works outthere with the working girls. So glad that the crew are keeping a close eye on her, but one slip up and things could go real bad.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Yes, and soon she'll find out how dangerous. Thank you for the kind review.