Six Appeal
The Perfect Six Contest Entry42 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
In reality I don't know if I've ever read an actual six poem but I did think this one deserves a five plus and I hope this helps you achieve your goal in getting another one. Enjoyable and Entertaining
Good Luck in the contest
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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In reality I don't know if I've ever read an actual six poem but I did think this one deserves a five plus and I hope this helps you achieve your goal in getting another one. Enjoyable and Entertaining
Good Luck in the contest
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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I'll take it! I'm honored by your words, thank you so much!
Xo
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh, Jennica, it's very good, but it is not a six
I am afraid, there's something wrong, that really needs a fix
I feel that you should know that you've been totally mislead
And your opinion of yourself is just inside your head
So I would like to see you thinking positive again
'Cause lovingly I say to you, that you deserve a ten
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Oh, Jennica, it's very good, but it is not a six
I am afraid, there's something wrong, that really needs a fix
I feel that you should know that you've been totally mislead
And your opinion of yourself is just inside your head
So I would like to see you thinking positive again
'Cause lovingly I say to you, that you deserve a ten
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Hahahaha amazing, Debi! This brought such a smile to my face! Thank you my dear friend xoxoxo
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Comment from Julie Helms
Yep, you earned it! Now, please go tell your husband and daughter they are really a 10! Very clever on and on throughout, perfectly tailored to the prompt, and you accidentally got me when I still had all my sixes.
Bravo!
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Yep, you earned it! Now, please go tell your husband and daughter they are really a 10! Very clever on and on throughout, perfectly tailored to the prompt, and you accidentally got me when I still had all my sixes.
Bravo!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Hahaha I appreciate the six, Julie, and your fabulous comment even more! Thank you very much!
Xoxo
Jess
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine humorous post with great dialogue and rhymes and I was thoroughly entertained Jessica and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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A fine humorous post with great dialogue and rhymes and I was thoroughly entertained Jessica and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly!! Xoxo
Comment from Begin Again
Oh yes...the hunt for those glittering stars and the accolades of receiving a six. Your poem was outstanding and your humor even more.... If we can't laugh at ourselves then who can we laugh with?
Well done...Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Oh yes...the hunt for those glittering stars and the accolades of receiving a six. Your poem was outstanding and your humor even more.... If we can't laugh at ourselves then who can we laugh with?
Well done...Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Carol, thank you so much for your wonderful review and sense of humor! Xoxo
Jess
Comment from teafor2
Jessica: With this humorous story in a rhyming poem, you've restored my confidence in my choice to come back to fanstory after a very, very long absence. Normally, I don't rite, read or review extended offerings, but something about this one made me take the plunge...It could have been
the play on words title; maybe it was the author's notes; or just maybe the creative headiness of scribe's storytelling abilities...I have read it through several times and the conversational spots/dialogue exchanges, between poetess, family and others, still make me chuckle...The context and contents of this bit of levity is remarkably funny. Thanks for sharing in this manner. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Jessica: With this humorous story in a rhyming poem, you've restored my confidence in my choice to come back to fanstory after a very, very long absence. Normally, I don't rite, read or review extended offerings, but something about this one made me take the plunge...It could have been
the play on words title; maybe it was the author's notes; or just maybe the creative headiness of scribe's storytelling abilities...I have read it through several times and the conversational spots/dialogue exchanges, between poetess, family and others, still make me chuckle...The context and contents of this bit of levity is remarkably funny. Thanks for sharing in this manner. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Well, you just made my whole day, teafor2!! I am so very honored by your words of encouragement, and truly appreciate your sense of humor. Thank you very much! Xoxo
Jessica
Comment from Lisasview
Oh I think it is definitely funny dearest Jessica... I often say to the ones that give me sixes that I wish I could just tie them all up into a beautiful bouquet... I do not understand why there is no reward for sixes...For example/// when one has 50 ~ 6's the get a Leprechaun..or something like that..
Or maybe????
I loved what you wrote... really good...
Lisa
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Oh I think it is definitely funny dearest Jessica... I often say to the ones that give me sixes that I wish I could just tie them all up into a beautiful bouquet... I do not understand why there is no reward for sixes...For example/// when one has 50 ~ 6's the get a Leprechaun..or something like that..
Or maybe????
I loved what you wrote... really good...
Lisa
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Lol thank you so much, my friend!! Xoxo
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You are so welcome,
Lisa
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, very good, I like your poem, although I think I post way too much to award six, the trouble when reviews a lot, they still get the bare six, it's more difficult to be magnanimous, but beautifully written, I'm not sure anyone else understands the six, heh heh, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Heh heh, very good, I like your poem, although I think I post way too much to award six, the trouble when reviews a lot, they still get the bare six, it's more difficult to be magnanimous, but beautifully written, I'm not sure anyone else understands the six, heh heh, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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lol thank you very much, Roy! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Xo
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Most welcome
Comment from Ulla
Oh this is funny, and take the micky out of so many of us. Myself included.But let's be fair it's such a fun site to be on. Sixes or no sixes, I have learned a lot over the years. Good luck with this fun poem. Ulla:))) ps: no six left, Lol
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Oh this is funny, and take the micky out of so many of us. Myself included.But let's be fair it's such a fun site to be on. Sixes or no sixes, I have learned a lot over the years. Good luck with this fun poem. Ulla:))) ps: no six left, Lol
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Lol, thank you so much, Ulla! Your kind words are worth much more to me!
I couldn't agree more about the site. I joined one year ago, and have gained more knowledge than I ever thought possible. The difference in my writing is significant, and I truly owe it all to reviewers on this site. Xoxo
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Jessica/Jennica!
I crown you with a 6!
There is nothing to fix
Your poem is a delight!
Creative and bright!
I predict this poem will soar
Unless... someone slaps you with a 4!
Best Wishes!
Thank you for the smile!
diane
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Hello, Jessica/Jennica!
I crown you with a 6!
There is nothing to fix
Your poem is a delight!
Creative and bright!
I predict this poem will soar
Unless... someone slaps you with a 4!
Best Wishes!
Thank you for the smile!
diane
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Hahahah
diane, a six from you is a true honor! Thank you for making my day!
Xoxo
Jess/Jenn