Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Quest"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from DanielEkine
All I can do, is smile. This is incredible. I am so happy to read this. Exceptional work. I believe every word of this work. Looking back with age, and knowing you lived the way you wanted. Great job and well-written. I will suggest, you maintain this writing style. It then becomes your trademark. Good artwork.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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All I can do, is smile. This is incredible. I am so happy to read this. Exceptional work. I believe every word of this work. Looking back with age, and knowing you lived the way you wanted. Great job and well-written. I will suggest, you maintain this writing style. It then becomes your trademark. Good artwork.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Delahay
This sends a good message of how we should each get away from our normal life long enough to examine our lives and try to understand what we are and if we are where we want to be. To discover if we will be able to look back on our life and be proud of how we lived it.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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This sends a good message of how we should each get away from our normal life long enough to examine our lives and try to understand what we are and if we are where we want to be. To discover if we will be able to look back on our life and be proud of how we lived it.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Janet Foor
I love the "PILGRIM" concept for life. We are just passing through this world on our way to the next. Very well written. I enjoyed the read.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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I love the "PILGRIM" concept for life. We are just passing through this world on our way to the next. Very well written. I enjoyed the read.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from victor 66
You have a very nice flow and balance to your poem. I believe your message in this piece is very true. If you have not had the life you desired, why are you here? The time goes by so quickly, we should feel contentment and joy with the knowledge that we have done what we were suppose to do and have expressed our passion to the fullest in this 'quest'. I wish you well, GW.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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You have a very nice flow and balance to your poem. I believe your message in this piece is very true. If you have not had the life you desired, why are you here? The time goes by so quickly, we should feel contentment and joy with the knowledge that we have done what we were suppose to do and have expressed our passion to the fullest in this 'quest'. I wish you well, GW.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
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Comment from lappmellott
Great job on the poem. I wandered from the photograph you used if you and been in the military, so it wasn't a surprise to me to see it in your bio. You are so right, we only have one life to live and we all need to be true to who and what we are.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Great job on the poem. I wandered from the photograph you used if you and been in the military, so it wasn't a surprise to me to see it in your bio. You are so right, we only have one life to live and we all need to be true to who and what we are.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Angel Debbie
Living Life and enjoying what you did is the greatest thing you could have done for yourself.
This is a super write! Thank You for sharing.
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Living Life and enjoying what you did is the greatest thing you could have done for yourself.
This is a super write! Thank You for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from michaelcahill
I nice statement of a life lived on ones own terms, the only way to live a life. A great illustration that goes perfectly with the piece, a submarine that can ride the surface and also explore the depths. mikey
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I nice statement of a life lived on ones own terms, the only way to live a life. A great illustration that goes perfectly with the piece, a submarine that can ride the surface and also explore the depths. mikey
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from xotic flotsam
Too many lament that life happened to them. Such a mindset relieves the sorrowful ponderers of accepting responsibility for their fates. This character looks down the long line of his life, satisfied with his choices.In the end, if we are not our own best friends, we may be reduced to solitary immersion. Thoughtful write. I enjoy the cadence and flow. Line lengths fit nicely. Poetic free verse. be well,
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Too many lament that life happened to them. Such a mindset relieves the sorrowful ponderers of accepting responsibility for their fates. This character looks down the long line of his life, satisfied with his choices.In the end, if we are not our own best friends, we may be reduced to solitary immersion. Thoughtful write. I enjoy the cadence and flow. Line lengths fit nicely. Poetic free verse. be well,
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Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
It is important that a man be his own man, and I believe you express this well; this, once accomplished allows one to choose his friends with knowledge. Kenny
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It is important that a man be his own man, and I believe you express this well; this, once accomplished allows one to choose his friends with knowledge. Kenny
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from robina1978
I never reviewed you before, but it was a very pleasant find. You lived your life to the fullest and without regrets. I hope to read more from you.
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I never reviewed you before, but it was a very pleasant find. You lived your life to the fullest and without regrets. I hope to read more from you.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014