Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Chapter 14; part three"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from bookishfabler
You must've already corrected and nits, because I didn't even see one. What a fun book and great chapter. I have enjoyed being your fan and reading your stories. I'm glad the liver worked, I wish I thought about it, but at least someone did.
hugs book
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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You must've already corrected and nits, because I didn't even see one. What a fun book and great chapter. I have enjoyed being your fan and reading your stories. I'm glad the liver worked, I wish I thought about it, but at least someone did.
hugs book
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
This story is a gem. She is such a proud woman, and already been through so much. He is a wonderful man, and seems to be patient and loving. I hope this continues in this same vein. It would be wonderful to have a happy ending. I'm glad the iron count is on an upward climb, and I hope that while you're reading this - you're beginning to feel better. ~patty~
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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This story is a gem. She is such a proud woman, and already been through so much. He is a wonderful man, and seems to be patient and loving. I hope this continues in this same vein. It would be wonderful to have a happy ending. I'm glad the iron count is on an upward climb, and I hope that while you're reading this - you're beginning to feel better. ~patty~
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Tellis
This was a great chapter and I think I would have been as angry as Joe over what was done to her and how she was treated for so long. No spags noticed.
Tellis
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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This was a great chapter and I think I would have been as angry as Joe over what was done to her and how she was treated for so long. No spags noticed.
Tellis
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. Small town America can be brutal.
Comment from Helen Tan
pebbles and threw each one individually toward the lake. "Damn!" He threw the rocks down
You used "pebbles" so for the second mention, stick with "pebbles", "rocks" gives an impression of bigger pieces. I hope you get what I mean.
Nothing like a picnic and a good talk to smooth things over. I didn't spot major SPAG - it's a clean chapter.
Glad to hear the chicken liver is working for you. Can't you talk other form of iron? Stay strong.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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pebbles and threw each one individually toward the lake. "Damn!" He threw the rocks down
You used "pebbles" so for the second mention, stick with "pebbles", "rocks" gives an impression of bigger pieces. I hope you get what I mean.
Nothing like a picnic and a good talk to smooth things over. I didn't spot major SPAG - it's a clean chapter.
Glad to hear the chicken liver is working for you. Can't you talk other form of iron? Stay strong.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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I was having the same problem with the rocks and pebbles.
Comment from Realist101
Hi Barbara! I didn't see spags, but then, I am just horrible with my own. This progressed along in a realistic and elegant manner, true to your style Barb, romantic and each chapter ending such that we want to continue! Nice work!! ") Luv you!! Susan
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Hi Barbara! I didn't see spags, but then, I am just horrible with my own. This progressed along in a realistic and elegant manner, true to your style Barb, romantic and each chapter ending such that we want to continue! Nice work!! ") Luv you!! Susan
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I honestly believe this story is so well crafted. I am enjoying reading tremendously and Cassie and Sarah are my favourite characters. I am overjoyed to hear your iron levels are improving.
Giddy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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I honestly believe this story is so well crafted. I am enjoying reading tremendously and Cassie and Sarah are my favourite characters. I am overjoyed to hear your iron levels are improving.
Giddy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from forestport12
When you write it is crisp as if I can hear the words snap to my mind. I can learnable from your style. I tend to ramble when I'm tired,a nd the KISS method should be written on our foreheads. You apply it every time you write. Simple, but powerful words.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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When you write it is crisp as if I can hear the words snap to my mind. I can learnable from your style. I tend to ramble when I'm tired,a nd the KISS method should be written on our foreheads. You apply it every time you write. Simple, but powerful words.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging words. I appreciate them.
Comment from marcellawachtel
Well, I couldn't find anything spag-y. This is such a nice chapter, the dramatics all happen in the dialog and the raking up of the past. As in many of the books I have enjoyed, I sort of regret approaching the end- this is not like a whodunnit where you want the answer, it is more like leaving a place where you've been visiting and enjoying the visit.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Well, I couldn't find anything spag-y. This is such a nice chapter, the dramatics all happen in the dialog and the raking up of the past. As in many of the books I have enjoyed, I sort of regret approaching the end- this is not like a whodunnit where you want the answer, it is more like leaving a place where you've been visiting and enjoying the visit.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Sara was worried that if he beat up Roy, he might take out his frustration again. This time is might be Cassie or her. Joe was able to explain that it wouldn't happen again. He regrets his actions. He was only trying to protect Sara and Cassie.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Sara was worried that if he beat up Roy, he might take out his frustration again. This time is might be Cassie or her. Joe was able to explain that it wouldn't happen again. He regrets his actions. He was only trying to protect Sara and Cassie.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your wonderful summary.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Barbara:
Hooray for chicken livers -- perhaps I need to give
them a try, too, to get my anemic blood a workout!
This is another fine chapter. The dialogue is realistic,
Sara's concerns are realistic, and Joe's answers are
reasonable.
Thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Barbara:
Hooray for chicken livers -- perhaps I need to give
them a try, too, to get my anemic blood a workout!
This is another fine chapter. The dialogue is realistic,
Sara's concerns are realistic, and Joe's answers are
reasonable.
Thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 23-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.