Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Chapter 15; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Belinda Amy Pantyboy
Its my first reading of this book but still enjoy different authors styles of writing. Well set out with good characters. Not knowing the story did not spoil my enjoyment.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Its my first reading of this book but still enjoy different authors styles of writing. Well set out with good characters. Not knowing the story did not spoil my enjoyment.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Joe planning everything was right in character; I would not change it. Sara rebuffing it is also in character. I very much enjoyed your novel. Hope you'll read the one I've been doing; that you like it also. I would say the strength in your story comes from to fallible people still being fallible even in love.
Many blessings. Hope we get to see you soon; I realize treatment and work must take priority. If You want to write and get suggestions while you trudge this road to remission feel free. I'll do whatever I can to help.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Joe planning everything was right in character; I would not change it. Sara rebuffing it is also in character. I very much enjoyed your novel. Hope you'll read the one I've been doing; that you like it also. I would say the strength in your story comes from to fallible people still being fallible even in love.
Many blessings. Hope we get to see you soon; I realize treatment and work must take priority. If You want to write and get suggestions while you trudge this road to remission feel free. I'll do whatever I can to help.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review, support, and wisdom.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This chapter is a great ending for this nice and interesting novel. I like the surprises that Joe planned for his bride. Very well done
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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This chapter is a great ending for this nice and interesting novel. I like the surprises that Joe planned for his bride. Very well done
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Congratulations on the completion of your book. I loved this chapter. So, what's wrong if Joe organised everything? I think it's romantic and Sara was right to haul him over the coals about it. Now he knows that she too has a say.
You ended this well.
Luv jada
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Congratulations on the completion of your book. I loved this chapter. So, what's wrong if Joe organised everything? I think it's romantic and Sara was right to haul him over the coals about it. Now he knows that she too has a say.
You ended this well.
Luv jada
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Minglement
Well, I'm glad Sara stood up for herself and at least addressed the situation of Joe's planning and setting up the weeding and even adoption, before propsing. HOwever it seems to me both would have needed more time before proceding. Joe is pretty controlling, from when he bought the tickets to take Sara to the reunion dinner/dance or whatever, without even asking if she was planning to go/did she have a date/did she want to go? He's not likely to let go of his controlling ways so easily. Sara's had to take in a lot of new information and would have to rearrange her whole life if she goes through with this and without giving it due consideration, it seems a girl with so little experience and self esteem would have more trouble taking it all in and deciding so quickly. I get that it al probably seems very fairytale like to her. Maybe it's because of being a military man. It's a lovely story, but having been married to a controlling type, I see trouble ahead. Probably just me. An interesting story. Good luck with it and I hope you are continuing to do well. Marcia
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Well, I'm glad Sara stood up for herself and at least addressed the situation of Joe's planning and setting up the weeding and even adoption, before propsing. HOwever it seems to me both would have needed more time before proceding. Joe is pretty controlling, from when he bought the tickets to take Sara to the reunion dinner/dance or whatever, without even asking if she was planning to go/did she have a date/did she want to go? He's not likely to let go of his controlling ways so easily. Sara's had to take in a lot of new information and would have to rearrange her whole life if she goes through with this and without giving it due consideration, it seems a girl with so little experience and self esteem would have more trouble taking it all in and deciding so quickly. I get that it al probably seems very fairytale like to her. Maybe it's because of being a military man. It's a lovely story, but having been married to a controlling type, I see trouble ahead. Probably just me. An interesting story. Good luck with it and I hope you are continuing to do well. Marcia
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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You may be right. As I right about the Task Force new hero's we will see cameo shots of our old friends. I won't let this drop. Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome. I felt it would serve no good purpose to say anything other than the truth, as I see it. :) I do hope you're feeling well. Take care and good luck. Marcia
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Oh, I do like happy endings..
thank you for that, Barbara.
"Oh, I'm sorry(, it's been) narrowed down to f
and who's the father of my child - here, we already know who is the father - might I suggest..
and who's to be a father to my child
she reach(ed) into
Margaret
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Oh, I do like happy endings..
thank you for that, Barbara.
"Oh, I'm sorry(, it's been) narrowed down to f
and who's the father of my child - here, we already know who is the father - might I suggest..
and who's to be a father to my child
she reach(ed) into
Margaret
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your eagle eye once again.
Comment from Yeti777
Great story telling and excellent sentence structure. Your brevity of lines are appreciated as they allow the reader's eyes and mind to breath with your work, making this an easy and enjoyable read. Great job. Sean
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Great story telling and excellent sentence structure. Your brevity of lines are appreciated as they allow the reader's eyes and mind to breath with your work, making this an easy and enjoyable read. Great job. Sean
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
I'm glad to hear you are doing better and the reviews are helping you with the final edits. While it may have seemed unrealistic to some that Joe planned the wedding - it DID remind me of "The Wedding" by Nicholas Sparks. His main character planned an entire formal wedding as a gift to his wife of 30 years to show he had changed. It still stands in my mind as the MOST romantic thing EVER! Joe is a very stand-up guy, and it is believable to me that he would do ANYTHING for Sara - including planning a wedding. I will miss this story line, but I'm looking forward to your next project. ~patty~
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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I'm glad to hear you are doing better and the reviews are helping you with the final edits. While it may have seemed unrealistic to some that Joe planned the wedding - it DID remind me of "The Wedding" by Nicholas Sparks. His main character planned an entire formal wedding as a gift to his wife of 30 years to show he had changed. It still stands in my mind as the MOST romantic thing EVER! Joe is a very stand-up guy, and it is believable to me that he would do ANYTHING for Sara - including planning a wedding. I will miss this story line, but I'm looking forward to your next project. ~patty~
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
You have constructed a live, engaging love story which held the reader's interest tot he very end. Which I may add was little surprising.
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You have constructed a live, engaging love story which held the reader's interest tot he very end. Which I may add was little surprising.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - I liked everything about this except the ending, The End. I've enjoyed how you have written a love story within an action piece. Well done. For some reason I'm not allowed to give you a six which I would have freely done. Despite having you own personal challenges, you cranked this out with your usual high standards. Really good stuff. Warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Hi Barbara - I liked everything about this except the ending, The End. I've enjoyed how you have written a love story within an action piece. Well done. For some reason I'm not allowed to give you a six which I would have freely done. Despite having you own personal challenges, you cranked this out with your usual high standards. Really good stuff. Warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 07-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2011
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Thank you Bill, you support is more than enough for me.
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Thank you Bill, you support is more than enough for me.