Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Part 1 Chapter 6"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from bookishfabler
It is always nice to see your story in m message box. another excellent chapter. Found nothing to pick at. I love also you always finish your books. I will eventually finish mine, but this time right now is bad and I can't think. Thanks for sharing
hugs book
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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It is always nice to see your story in m message box. another excellent chapter. Found nothing to pick at. I love also you always finish your books. I will eventually finish mine, but this time right now is bad and I can't think. Thanks for sharing
hugs book
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Deejharrington
Congrats on the new computer! The story in going well. At least they are almost sure Anna and her son are in a hidden shelter and safe. They will have wait for her to come out. Very well done.
deb
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Congrats on the new computer! The story in going well. At least they are almost sure Anna and her son are in a hidden shelter and safe. They will have wait for her to come out. Very well done.
deb
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome
deb
Comment from MizKat
Barbara - This is very interesting. I throroughly enjoyed reading it. You are such an outstanding author and your writing is always perfect. Kat
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Barbara - This is very interesting. I throroughly enjoyed reading it. You are such an outstanding author and your writing is always perfect. Kat
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Merry Peace
Hi
it is interesting story ...though some times it seems vague but it is due to be connected with other cahpters. most i like is the use of simple words.......sharacters are strong ......and would be clearer afterwards. you always say things fantastically ...it is good work.....it is well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Hi
it is interesting story ...though some times it seems vague but it is due to be connected with other cahpters. most i like is the use of simple words.......sharacters are strong ......and would be clearer afterwards. you always say things fantastically ...it is good work.....it is well done.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Carolyn 12
I hope Anna and the baby can stay in hiding as long as she needs to get strong..Thank God there are safe houses for women and children..I look froward to the next segment..
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I hope Anna and the baby can stay in hiding as long as she needs to get strong..Thank God there are safe houses for women and children..I look froward to the next segment..
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Cynthia Tee
Thank you for another good write. Do you know someone who has been in this situation? As I said in one of my reviews I was one of them. Probably fell into the "hopeless" group because he tried that on a few occassions but one day I did get the courage to go, praise the Gods that be! Thank you for sharing with us. Warm regards, Cynthia.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for another good write. Do you know someone who has been in this situation? As I said in one of my reviews I was one of them. Probably fell into the "hopeless" group because he tried that on a few occassions but one day I did get the courage to go, praise the Gods that be! Thank you for sharing with us. Warm regards, Cynthia.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Yes, I do know someone who was in this situation. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
This part of the story is very interesting. I like that Troy believes Anna is safe. This gives an insight about groups that help these women and children. Can't wait for more.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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This part of the story is very interesting. I like that Troy believes Anna is safe. This gives an insight about groups that help these women and children. Can't wait for more.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from volcomfury
Beautifully written chapter in what is sure to be a great story. You have a truly unique writing style. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Beautifully written chapter in what is sure to be a great story. You have a truly unique writing style. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Michelle S
This is very well written. I have been away from FS for a few months and am just jumping into the story now but look forward to catching up.
Michelle
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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This is very well written. I have been away from FS for a few months and am just jumping into the story now but look forward to catching up.
Michelle
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb,
you definite had me very convened where Anna is
I hate to think that Anna's miserable husband will do if he finds Anna and her son.
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Hi Barb,
you definite had me very convened where Anna is
I hate to think that Anna's miserable husband will do if he finds Anna and her son.
Gert
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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Smiles
Gert