Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Part one. Chapter 7"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi barbara.wilkey
A very well written story which explores very well/openly your creative and involved protagonist/characters.
Having never experienced domestic violence, it seem inappropriate to comment further.
Regards, Pete
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Hi barbara.wilkey
A very well written story which explores very well/openly your creative and involved protagonist/characters.
Having never experienced domestic violence, it seem inappropriate to comment further.
Regards, Pete
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Bravo for this new chapter! Everything is going smoothly. I am happy to be solving the problems of Anna and she can make a life free of fear. I liked this, especially the kindness of friends of Anna. Congratulations, excellent job.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Bravo for this new chapter! Everything is going smoothly. I am happy to be solving the problems of Anna and she can make a life free of fear. I liked this, especially the kindness of friends of Anna. Congratulations, excellent job.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jclark
Is it true that an abuser would "back down" if stood up to? How many times have women told those kind of men that they were leaving only to be tracked down and, in some instances, killed?
I like this chapter because it "feels good" and hopefully all the bases have been covered.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Is it true that an abuser would "back down" if stood up to? How many times have women told those kind of men that they were leaving only to be tracked down and, in some instances, killed?
I like this chapter because it "feels good" and hopefully all the bases have been covered.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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I think it depends on the abuser. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from glpar
It is good to see the tides beginning to turn in her favor. Anna has some good friends to help her out and assist her on her journey to a new life. Well written.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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It is good to see the tides beginning to turn in her favor. Anna has some good friends to help her out and assist her on her journey to a new life. Well written.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from moyramouse
I continue to be impressed by the standard of your research into the background of cases like this and the legal intricacies. I liked the little injection of humour with Paul's reference to the donut and Troy's reply!
Anna is being swept away with the kindness of Paul,Betty and Margaret. It shows her a different type of life exists, where people genuinely care for one another, couples can joke together and men can babysit babies! xxmouse
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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I continue to be impressed by the standard of your research into the background of cases like this and the legal intricacies. I liked the little injection of humour with Paul's reference to the donut and Troy's reply!
Anna is being swept away with the kindness of Paul,Betty and Margaret. It shows her a different type of life exists, where people genuinely care for one another, couples can joke together and men can babysit babies! xxmouse
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
THIS IS A WONDERFUL NEW CHAPTER, INTERESTING AND WELL WRITTEN. YOU'RE VERY GOOD AT CONVEYING YOUR CHARACTER'S EMOTION WELL THROUGH THEIR CONVERSATIONS. THE DIALOGUES ARE EXCELLENT! GREAT JOB BARBARA!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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THIS IS A WONDERFUL NEW CHAPTER, INTERESTING AND WELL WRITTEN. YOU'RE VERY GOOD AT CONVEYING YOUR CHARACTER'S EMOTION WELL THROUGH THEIR CONVERSATIONS. THE DIALOGUES ARE EXCELLENT! GREAT JOB BARBARA!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
It's so good Anna is
now amongst friends,
who will support her..
and is finding a friend
in Betty.
be Michael. ["]How old
An enjoyable read, Barbara.
Margaret
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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It's so good Anna is
now amongst friends,
who will support her..
and is finding a friend
in Betty.
be Michael. ["]How old
An enjoyable read, Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Thank you for catching that. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from acvguard11
great job..i see why this is an all time best..remember dont let others discourage you if you love to write..have fun and do what you love..great word choice throughout the piiece and continue writing!!!!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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great job..i see why this is an all time best..remember dont let others discourage you if you love to write..have fun and do what you love..great word choice throughout the piiece and continue writing!!!!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good continuing chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it.
"I'll get some ice (iced) tea and cookies."
Betty passed out the glasses of ice (iced) tea and set the Paul stepped in to (into) the hall.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Good continuing chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it.
"I'll get some ice (iced) tea and cookies."
Betty passed out the glasses of ice (iced) tea and set the Paul stepped in to (into) the hall.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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On the tea issue either is correct. I am trying to get an official ruling to settle the argument once and for all. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
This chapter reads like real occurrences, Barbara. The reader doesn't despair at the abuse and divorce because you provide a brighter picture.
But you deal with the reality of cunning men and sly tactics.
I like your dialogue and describing of characters.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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This chapter reads like real occurrences, Barbara. The reader doesn't despair at the abuse and divorce because you provide a brighter picture.
But you deal with the reality of cunning men and sly tactics.
I like your dialogue and describing of characters.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.