Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Part two, Chapter 8"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Music Bob
Hi,
I have just returned from a few days in Scotland and have now been able to read your latest chapter. I have known a few people in a similar situation to Anna. Your writing is very realistic and very clearly presented. It certainly shows the horrible lifestyle that so many people are forced to endure.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Hi,
I have just returned from a few days in Scotland and have now been able to read your latest chapter. I have known a few people in a similar situation to Anna. Your writing is very realistic and very clearly presented. It certainly shows the horrible lifestyle that so many people are forced to endure.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from fairy77
Excellent still.Thanks for the review!Good establishing Anna's new life.Raising an infant in this situation cannot be easy.Well done!Could a new love interest be brewing?Well written.Your a very generous and kind lady.Sorry no six stars left.beth fairy77.
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Excellent still.Thanks for the review!Good establishing Anna's new life.Raising an infant in this situation cannot be easy.Well done!Could a new love interest be brewing?Well written.Your a very generous and kind lady.Sorry no six stars left.beth fairy77.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
Great additions to the story. The work posted just fine. Hope you are enjoying your vacation. Things are moving pretty fast for Anna. Can't wait for more.
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Great additions to the story. The work posted just fine. Hope you are enjoying your vacation. Things are moving pretty fast for Anna. Can't wait for more.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amada
You write a very mindful domestic scene, everyone is getting alone just fine in this household, a far cry from Ana's background. This is a great chance of scene.
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You write a very mindful domestic scene, everyone is getting alone just fine in this household, a far cry from Ana's background. This is a great chance of scene.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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T%hank you for the kind review.
Comment from rchitwood
Very good story and I really enjoyed reading it again.I will have to watch for the next chapter. Good dialogue and characters very believable, and I would recommend this to others.Blessings Rita
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Very good story and I really enjoyed reading it again.I will have to watch for the next chapter. Good dialogue and characters very believable, and I would recommend this to others.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Short, concise and straight forward. This chapter part is intense. and I love the where you ended it. It is right on target. No nits or SNAGS. Excellent.
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Short, concise and straight forward. This chapter part is intense. and I love the where you ended it. It is right on target. No nits or SNAGS. Excellent.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
another one of those great chapters you write. You do such a good job of involving your reader. The tension is building again wondering what is going to happen next.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2011
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another one of those great chapters you write. You do such a good job of involving your reader. The tension is building again wondering what is going to happen next.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Anna is ready to move into her new apartment. It's a beginning of a new life. I can understand her nervousness. She'll be living alone. She fears that might find her. I hope Mr. Keller can be supportive.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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Anna is ready to move into her new apartment. It's a beginning of a new life. I can understand her nervousness. She'll be living alone. She fears that might find her. I hope Mr. Keller can be supportive.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jen Gentry
Barbara,
You have conveyed Anna's hope and excitement at starting a new life in her own apartment very well. I really love your characters and the support they show Anna is heartwarming well done chapter.
Blessings
Jenny
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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Barbara,
You have conveyed Anna's hope and excitement at starting a new life in her own apartment very well. I really love your characters and the support they show Anna is heartwarming well done chapter.
Blessings
Jenny
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sunnilicious
I you're added touch with the biscuits. It sure does sound yummilicious. I think she should of bought a house instead of an apartment. However, I like the happiness that surrounded the day. So glad there are a lot of supportive people around her too. Nice work. :)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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I you're added touch with the biscuits. It sure does sound yummilicious. I think she should of bought a house instead of an apartment. However, I like the happiness that surrounded the day. So glad there are a lot of supportive people around her too. Nice work. :)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. She doesn't have the money for a house, she didn't have the down payment for renting the apartment.